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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • ida%s's Photo

    The layout without scenery and supports.2zfu9eg.png

  • Faas%s's Photo

    Would be cool if one of your helixes at the end went the other way. Now it's just two of the same elements after each other. 

  • ida%s's Photo

    I don't really like the empty space that would create, to be honest.

  • Faas%s's Photo

    You are the one to decide if the space would be empty or not. 

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    ^^You could avoid that by using a diagonal bank to the left and then immediately to the right after the first one and that could smoothly transition into a helix in the opposite direction.

  • Mattk48%s's Photo

    Its not bad, It just doesn't flow right for me. The elements seem forced,  and the foliage is wayyyy to dense in that one spot. 

  • ida%s's Photo

    @coaster

     

    Good idea, i'll try doing something with it.

     

    @matt

     

    I'd like to make it very dense and put some castle buildings inbetween it.

  • ida%s's Photo

    Station + new helix. What should i do with the buildings? I honestly find the one for the coaster ugly, but i don't know what else to do with it.r72k47.png

  • Faas%s's Photo

    Try changing the brick colour from red (why?) to gray. This means you will have to change the gray path to the one you've already used but that's not a problem. 

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    That red/peach isn't a great color scheme, and Faas is probably right about changing the brick color.  The tan building looks quite nice!

  • csw%s's Photo

    I'd like to see a few more airtime hills in the first part of the layout. This would spread it out a bit more and vary up the knot-like layout you have now. Keep building and you'll get better

  • ida%s's Photo

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  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    Coaster aside, there's some nice little details on those buildings.  In particular, the wooden beams on the jutting out part of the centre building look good to me.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    good improvement, and nice work on the roof.  

  • Faas%s's Photo

    The colours are better, but I preferred the structure you had on the previous screen. It looked more like a castle. Now it's a random mix of architecture. 

  • ida%s's Photo

    Yeah, but it looked too plain and random, thats why i changed it. It's still not finished though, i'm still adding more to the roof.

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