I feel that building to the left should have a purpose. I would delete the walls on the roof too. I don't particularly like the trackitecture either. This is probably your best work so far though.
I feel that building to the left should have a purpose. I would delete the walls on the roof too. I don't particularly like the trackitecture either. This is probably your best work so far though.
i was going to make it a shop that sells candy and that sort of stuff, maybe i should make it more clear. and what kind of roof would you suggest i use for the station? also thanks for the compliment
It's pleasant although a coaster that small wouldn't need a transfer track as far as I'm concerned.
the thing i was going for was more of a spare track thing. you know like a storage space.
I'm really curious as to how that transfer track would work. There's no room for it to slide and no room for the track before or after it to slide. Otherwise it's a very nice screen.
Yeah, I'm not sure you've quite grasped the mechanics of the transfer track here, so I would suggest removing it. You've certainly got the calming feeling going on that you were aiming for, so that's good. And I also like the boarder of trees around the area.
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Poke Offline
I feel that building to the left should have a purpose. I would delete the walls on the roof too. I don't particularly like the trackitecture either. This is probably your best work so far though.
trav Offline
It's pleasant although a coaster that small wouldn't need a transfer track as far as I'm concerned.
Lotte Offline
i was going to make it a shop that sells candy and that sort of stuff, maybe i should make it more clear. and what kind of roof would you suggest i use for the station? also thanks for the compliment
the thing i was going for was more of a spare track thing. you know like a storage space.
trav Offline
Storage for what?
Lotte Offline
i don't know, for when trains retire or just when brakes need replacements. guess i'll take it out
Louis! Offline
Yeah a coaster that size wouldn't need a strorage track. It would only have one train which would be stored in the station.
The only exceptions to this are Wacky Worms that run on a turntable. They have more than 1 train, but they run on a turntable, not a block system.
Anyway, not keen on the red flowers, the rest is nice though
Coasterbill Offline
I'm really curious as to how that transfer track would work. There's no room for it to slide and no room for the track before or after it to slide. Otherwise it's a very nice screen.
Chocotopian Offline
Yeah, I'm not sure you've quite grasped the mechanics of the transfer track here, so I would suggest removing it. You've certainly got the calming feeling going on that you were aiming for, so that's good. And I also like the boarder of trees around the area.
Lotte Offline
how is this guys?
Ling Offline
I like. I'm curious why you have a building with nothing in it next to two uncovered shops. Are you not using 8cars for this or something?
Louis! Offline
Better, but I think I preferred the fountain you had rather than the playground.
Lotte Offline
the building actually has 3 shops in it. i picked those shops because they feel like actual stalls and that makes everything a bit more alive.
but... but.. it even has a football field , you could've been the entertainer who's supposed to represent the coach there louis!
Faas Offline
Cool idea, but a football field in between two rollercoasters seems a bit dangerous.
trav Offline
I prefer the playground, gives a lot more vibrancy to the area as a whole, which it definitely needed to bring it out of just being 'pleasant'.
Poke Offline
Very cute work.