Screenshot / CHILDRENS CITY 2025 - MAGIC CARPET PALACE

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Mattk48%s's Photo

    I think your architecture is starting to come a long way. Thats a cool building and great positioning on the coast.

     

    I think your rocky cliff could use some work, it looks very samey and needs some variation.

  • Lurker%s's Photo

    I like the gardens and foliage on the left, stone buildings I think are simple and effective, main building has some nice trim and window work, I like the yellow stripes on the towers.

    Main suggestion I'd give is on the right, there's a few sharp edges on the rocks and repeating textures, I think adding some more rock pieces in front might make a more natural shape. (There's also a missing chunk of water)

  • Hex%s's Photo

    MTC,

     

    Please never stop building! You are such a beacon of light in this community, and we all love having you here.  It makes me so happy to see how far you've come in your building journey!

     

    I agree with Mattk48 about the cliff rocks.  There are a lot of different textures and different object usage, but even with the different objects, it still feels a bit repetitive.  Perhaps try pulling some of the cliff outward or inward so it's not all in a straight line.  Or, perhaps some foliage (shrubs, grass, etc.) to help break up the wall of rock.

     

    There is so much to enjoy about this screen.  The elevation differences, the large structure in the center, the two little buildings with the black roofs by the fountain, the nice bits of foliage sprinkled around.  All of these details are such a nice touch.

     

    Very eager to see more of what you have! :)

  • J K%s's Photo

    Improvements across the board! Keep going MTC!

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Love the look here MTC, you're making impressive progress

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