Screenshot / Vikingernes Område

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  posted 6 days ago

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  Version1 Offline

  Yes, brown is a theme.

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  FredD Offline

  Lovely setting, good rockwork going on. Forest density is pretty heavy, def watch out with that. The shop is nice but the tan brown doesn't really work for me, I'd paint it a darker shade of brown. Overall lovely atmosphere and still very reminiscing of the true Farup.

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  MK98 Offline

  Nice screen that has a good classic vibe. I don't think that the walls and roof have to be the same color at the same building, so I would give the walls a darker brown indeed. Maybe use a little crunch and mix the textures up a little to make the buildings look somewhat older. Other than that I think you're getting better and better each time I see a screen of you

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  RWE Offline

  Cozy screen with a good atmosphere, keep it up. I would suggest to especially work a bit on the transition between the rocks and the water. Another level of granularity would work very well here in my opinion.

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  J K Offline

  Great atmosphere, some more foliage in the water around the rocks will be great and maybe some more 1x4 work around the structures but it's solid!

   

  The gates as an entrance is nice and I feel this is a really realistic touch if the theme park wanted to close that section at some point.

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  geezz!!! I loved this green roof with wood, it was charming and I loved the gate at the entrance and the rock/stone, very good   -  nice atmosphere

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  Gustav Goblin Offline

  Every time you post a new screen or park the improvement is palpable. Some of your best work right here. I feel like I'm missing context but some of the paths look a little skinny and angular, such as the one in the bottom left surrounded by open grass. Likewise, I feel like the path with the bench and the big tree behind it could be opened up to become a diagonal which would make peep flow to the tan building a little more natural. Adding onto the discussion concerning granularity around the water edge, more foliage and some Fisch boulders with green mixed in to represent moss would round it out nicely. Really not much else to complain about though, the archi and dense woodland foliage bang.

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  Turtle Offline

  i like it! would like to see maybe some light rushes / flowers around the bottom of the rocks, and maybe on them a little? another color added with flowers would be a nice little pop imo

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  posix Offline

  Not bad. I think you've achieved a tiny amount more organicness, and it helps, but is still lacking for me.

   

  Maybe you could trim the trees on the right a little from this view, so they don't hide the ornate building quite so much.

  posted 5 days ago

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  nin Offline

  I echo what Turtle suggested. The bottom left corner is a bit too clean, add a few small grasses or shrubs, etc. around the base of the rocks for a more natural transition.

  posted 2 days ago

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