Screenshot / Fun Spot Atlanta

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  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    Lookin good

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    yeah I like that support work a looooot

  • AJ-%s's Photo

    super cool, really love the huge ass support structures. so sleek and fresh. great ncso !!!

  • posix%s's Photo

    Very technical and impressive.

     

    Think it would be nice if you could make the foliage and terraforming more organic. I understand you went for a manicured look, but I think either you've overshot a bit, or you could make a manicured look that has aged a bit: little weeds, the grass mixing more with dirt where it's not supposed to, discolouring in the tarmac, etc.

  • ottersalad%s's Photo


    Very technical and impressive.

     

    Think it would be nice if you could make the foliage and terraforming more organic. I understand you went for a manicured look, but I think either you've overshot a bit, or you could make a manicured look that has aged a bit: little weeds, the grass mixing more with dirt where it's not supposed to, discolouring in the tarmac, etc.

     

     

    Looks like he is a disciple of the Ottersalad School of Foliage 

  • ballpitwarrior%s's Photo

    Very technical and impressive.
     
    Think it would be nice if you could make the foliage and terraforming more organic. I understand you went for a manicured look, but I think either you've overshot a bit, or you could make a manicured look that has aged a bit: little weeds, the grass mixing more with dirt where it's not supposed to, discolouring in the tarmac, etc.

    Great feedback! I’ll look at mixing up those textures a bit more to make it more interesting to look at. I’ll mess with the foliage variety too. Road texturing is a good idea too


    And yes I’d say this is inspired by foliage I’ve seen in your NCSO Otter as well as a few others ?
  • Turtle%s's Photo

    ooohh i feel like this is one of those things that is WAY harder to make look good than I suspect, and i already suspect it's pretty hard. looks great man. 

     

    agree with others on the foliage, i like the buildings but everything else does feel slightly like an afterthought. 

  • Mr.Brightside711%s's Photo

    The flat mini coaster track stands out in a bad way. I'd either change that or just remove it and I think it would be fine. Also can probably change some of the backstage vehicle colors to add some more pops of color. I know white it typical but plenty of parks have backstage cars in other colors. Besides that, I love it!!

  • J K%s's Photo

    Love that, really fresh and really nice touches throughout. Big fan.

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    It's a little on the boring side, but I suppose it's fitting, and it's commendable how clean your execution is.

  • Luketh%s's Photo

    The lawn mowers are my favorite detail here. They've done well! And so have you.

  • Luketh%s's Photo

    The lawn mowers are my favorite detail here. They've done well! And so have you.

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