Screenshot / CHILDRENS CITY 2024 - CASTLE - GARDEN

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  Turtle Offline

  There are parts of this that i really like and parts that i wish were slightly different... the gardens, the hedges, the trees etc. are all great actually. the landscaping in the middle bottom and the tree with hedges on the right are my favorite parts, really good.

   

  the building itself isn't doing it for me, texture-wise. i just don't like that wall object group, it feels a little cartoony. i'd be interested to see a similar-sized structure built from the light brick objects you have for the outer wall. i do like the front large windows.

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  posix Offline

  This is cute. But perhaps it could be a little bit more organic, despite being a manicured garden. What's there is very on or off. So maybe just a few imperfections would help (?).

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  
  

  This is cute. But perhaps it could be a little bit more organic, despite being a manicured garden. What's there is very on or off. So maybe just a few imperfections would help (?).

  hummm, "So maybe just a few imperfections would help (?). "

  i try 

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  
  

  There are parts of this that i really like and parts that i wish were slightly different... the gardens, the hedges, the trees etc. are all great actually. the landscaping in the middle bottom and the tree with hedges on the right are my favorite parts, really good.

   

  the building itself isn't doing it for me, texture-wise. i just don't like that wall object group, it feels a little cartoony. i'd be interested to see a similar-sized structure built from the light brick objects you have for the outer wall. i do like the front large windows.

  hehe I was thinking, will they like these old objects?

  Ok, I will try to improve this

  posted 4 months ago

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