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  Lotte Offline

  so, you added those blue wooden supports and that yellow? that's not a lot of colour is it. try adding colours through accents. stuff like signs and stuff can have different colours to make it stand out a little

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  trav Offline

  The foliage needs work. I can see what you were trying to do, but firstly there are bushes there that don't belong there, and secondly not every single quarter tile needs to be filled up, especially around the path edges.

   

  At the moment it also looks thick in a bad way, in that it looks thicker off the ground rather than on the ground. A good way to get around this is to use the shrub fence pieces, and you can also stack these where you've got elevated areas along the wall so that there isn't just a completely flat edge sticking out. Also, don't be afraid of stacking bushes (of the same type) on top of each other to give it more depth.

   

  The architecture obviously needs work, the station for the water ride is literally a big block. Play around with different levels a bit more with that, as well as different textures. One texture I've always found fits in a jungle area is the rusty steel wall that you've used for the roofing everywhere. 

   

  The Twist looks reasonably decent, although please choose another colour than green. I'm also not 100% sure what the little seating area is behind that, but it doesn't seem to make a lot of sense without any shops being there.

   

  I don't know why you've coloured the supports blue and yellow, that's obviously not what people meant when they said add colour. Why would a B&M have wooden supports like that? And then what on earth is the yellow thing meant to be? Instead, think of adding colours. Something like a purple or a yellow would really add a lot.

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  Version1 Offline

  
  

  The foliage needs work. I can see what you were trying to do, but firstly there are bushes there that don't belong there, and secondly not every single quarter tile needs to be filled up, especially around the path edges.

   

  At the moment it also looks thick in a bad way, in that it looks thicker off the ground rather than on the ground. A good way to get around this is to use the shrub fence pieces, and you can also stack these where you've got elevated areas along the wall so that there isn't just a completely flat edge sticking out. Also, don't be afraid of stacking bushes (of the same type) on top of each other to give it more depth.

   

  The architecture obviously needs work, the station for the water ride is literally a big block. Play around with different levels a bit more with that, as well as different textures. One texture I've always found fits in a jungle area is the rusty steel wall that you've used for the roofing everywhere. 

   

  The Twist looks reasonably decent, although please choose another colour than green. I'm also not 100% sure what the little seating area is behind that, but it doesn't seem to make a lot of sense without any shops being there.

   

  I don't know why you've coloured the supports blue and yellow, that's obviously not what people meant when they said add colour. Why would a B&M have wooden supports like that? And then what on earth is the yellow thing meant to be? Instead, think of adding colours. Something like a purple or a yellow would really add a lot.

   

  Thanks for this helpfull feedback.

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  inthemanual Offline

  When I suggested making it seem like a show was inside the waterfall, I didn't mean just place a sign on it. It needs a bit more details, like a show schedule on the exterior or a ticketing booth for it. You can make it feel more like a show with more than just a sign.

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