I am really enjoying the direction this project is taking. There is a good level of detail on the interiors and at the path level on what could otherwise be a cluster of small and simple buildings. The cotton candy stall in particular is really neat.
I like the choice of lamppost. The G Force one made out of objects could work but would look a little chunky at this scale. A pleasant mix of brightly colored balloons seems to be one of your trademarks which is cool and works well in this atmosphere. The coaster is looking nice as well.
Here are a few nitpicky things:
Woodie station interior is relatively bare and could use an accent color on the trim or posts (white?).
Log flume station roof is texturally busy. Tile roof could probably go in favor of a steep version of the rusty roof.
The decorative signage/fence on the stations with the... bottles?... works well but is a tad overused. It has shown up a lot in previous screens as well.
The wooden fence on the center left next to the umbrellas seems like it could work as the black metal fence.
Overall great work and I'm getting hyped for this project which has really blossomed from the humble but quality early screens.
Great screen Jappy, such a fun, lively atmosphere as always. Only thing that sticks out to me a bit is the the colour of the woodie station - the rest of the screen is very cool hues and the warm tan is a bit dissonant here.
I agree about the station, there has to be a better approach to that. The rest is really really nice, inspirational to me even. Still a few technical things I think you could do a little more with, the gardening and foliage being one, but otherwise top notch.
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Milo Offline
I am really enjoying the direction this project is taking. There is a good level of detail on the interiors and at the path level on what could otherwise be a cluster of small and simple buildings. The cotton candy stall in particular is really neat.
I like the choice of lamppost. The G Force one made out of objects could work but would look a little chunky at this scale. A pleasant mix of brightly colored balloons seems to be one of your trademarks which is cool and works well in this atmosphere. The coaster is looking nice as well.
Here are a few nitpicky things:
Woodie station interior is relatively bare and could use an accent color on the trim or posts (white?).
Log flume station roof is texturally busy. Tile roof could probably go in favor of a steep version of the rusty roof.
The decorative signage/fence on the stations with the... bottles?... works well but is a tad overused. It has shown up a lot in previous screens as well.
The wooden fence on the center left next to the umbrellas seems like it could work as the black metal fence.
Overall great work and I'm getting hyped for this project which has really blossomed from the humble but quality early screens.
FredD Fan Offline
This screen actually makes me want to visit a theme park... Great atmosphere in this screen, love it.
ottersalad Offline
Agree with Milo.. the wooden coaster station interior could use a bit more detail considering how detailed your stalls along the path are.
alex Offline
Great screen Jappy, such a fun, lively atmosphere as always. Only thing that sticks out to me a bit is the the colour of the woodie station - the rest of the screen is very cool hues and the warm tan is a bit dissonant here.
Coasterbill Offline
Great work!
G Force Offline
I agree about the station, there has to be a better approach to that. The rest is really really nice, inspirational to me even. Still a few technical things I think you could do a little more with, the gardening and foliage being one, but otherwise top notch.
Hex Offline
This is incredibly charming!