Screenshot / Sorcerer entrance

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  • Jappy%s's Photo

    I like the use of the white flowers here! And it feels pretty quaint.

     

    If I may give some tips....

    - Replacing one of those birches in the middle for another tree would be a good idea to create some variation;

    - The foliage on the water edge is pretty straight, perhaps try to add some irregularity to it. 

     

    But all in all, this has some potential. Looking forward to it!

  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo

    Thanks Jappy.  Yeah, I'll definitely go back and fix the straightness of the waterside foliage.

  • AJ-%s's Photo

    this is fun, would love to walk under that ride, great interaction

  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo

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  • RWE%s's Photo

    not much to see, but whats there looks nice.

  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo

    not much to see, but whats there looks nice.

     

    Cool story bro.

  • Faas%s's Photo
    I would give the lampposts a different secondary colour instead of making them all black. Also i would use a higher fence for the path directly near the water.
  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo
    Great points. I'll go back and change the lamps for sure.
  • Liampie%s's Photo

    I like it man

  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo

    Thanks Liampie.

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