Wow, very impressive with scale and overall shape. The red roof is too much though, and I think especially so for the steep roof pieces because that intense saturation really brings out the repetitive pattern of those objects. I would suggest trying a more muted red perhaps. I think the light grey for the flat parts of the roof kinda works here actually, but I think it could use some more definition and detail as opposed to being an almost textureless void, Another comment is that the foliage looks quite random - the general placement looks good, but I'd try to be a bit more deliberate in the choice of objects and colors used.
I actually disagree with Liam and Split- I really enjoy the deeply saturated red color. But, I’m really into using color in the game right now. I loved your use of angles here. This was a joy to look at.
I do agree that it’s missing some details: planters with greenery on the balconies would do wonders. Elsewhere, the flat, gray roofs are missing a ton of detail work. They felt like a missed opportunity to add some HVAC stuff and some gritty texture. Great screen!
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Splitvision Offline
Wow, very impressive with scale and overall shape. The red roof is too much though, and I think especially so for the steep roof pieces because that intense saturation really brings out the repetitive pattern of those objects. I would suggest trying a more muted red perhaps. I think the light grey for the flat parts of the roof kinda works here actually, but I think it could use some more definition and detail as opposed to being an almost textureless void, Another comment is that the foliage looks quite random - the general placement looks good, but I'd try to be a bit more deliberate in the choice of objects and colors used.
Nice start, looking forward to more!
ottersalad Offline
Wow. This is very impressive. Keep it up!
Liampie Offline
The red roof is a bit much indeed, but that's also because you're building at a larger scale than usual. Good stuff, regardless
J K Offline
Looking great, love that you've gone with a big structure and made it look great! A hard thing to do in RCT. Excited to see more.
alex Offline
This is awesome!
Jaguar Offline
I was going to say it was missing a few details... then I clicked on the full screen and it really surprised me.
The scale on this is awesome. Love big buildings; wish we'd go back to this meta.
Xeccah Offline
nicholasrhilton Offline
I do agree that it’s missing some details: planters with greenery on the balconies would do wonders. Elsewhere, the flat, gray roofs are missing a ton of detail work. They felt like a missed opportunity to add some HVAC stuff and some gritty texture. Great screen!
In:Cities Offline
This is great! Big fan