Screenshot / The Aviary

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo

    Nice, good first screen.  Maybe a little lacking on path details and details around the splashdown, but as a whole well done. 

     

    I'd maybe try messing with your screenshot method so it doesn't scale oddly, would recommend not using snipping tool if you did, doesn't really play nice with RCT graphics.

  • J K%s's Photo

    Love that. Solid structures, commitment to the theme... keep going!

  • Lurker%s's Photo

    A nice glass structure, and I like the viewpoints and structures next to the splashdown. Only suggestion I'd have is basically what J K said, a few extra details in the splashdown area itself. Overall I really like this, solid stuff, and a very nice debut screen on NE.

  • Gustav Goblin%s's Photo

    So happy you came here from Reddit. I always thought you had a ton of potential from what I saw over there. Super excited for this first release!

  • Ethan%s's Photo
    The glass work and wood frames is so good
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Very cool screen! But it definitely needs more path details like bins and benches, and I also think you should use another lamppost object.

    Edit: also, isn't it spelled aviary?
  • alex%s's Photo

    That looks great - i love how the detailing of the glass structure isn't the victorian style we typically see but has more of an 80s postmodern vibe.

  • posix%s's Photo

    Nice, quite clean. Ace's objects I'm not sold on.

  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    Lamppost probably shouldn't be brown, otherwise quite enjoyable. 

  • kenos%s's Photo

    really nice has more zoo vibes than amusement park but really cool and clean shot

     


    Lamppost probably shouldn't be brown, otherwise quite enjoyable. 

     

    i found the colour from the entrance of the pillars of the glas building nice as lamppost

  • In:Cities%s's Photo

    beautiful work. I'd love to see you take a screenshot at the proper zoom resolution though!

     

    Looking forward to seeing more from you on this. Definitely missing some "life" in regards to peeps, seating, bins, maybe some signage/accent colors. Quick service on the pathways (umbrellas, etc)

  • nicholasrhilton%s's Photo
    Very cool structure. Overall, this feels a little lifeless to me, but it’s a great start and I’m very excited to see more from you!
  • Mattk48%s's Photo

    Love the windows in the rock wall, however I would use the same type of rocks throughout. Get rid of the 1k ruin rocks on the bottom and extend the same style of rocks framing the windows down to where the 1k rocks are. Just so it matches. Great screen, love the atmosphere.

     

    Edit - Maybe even extend that style of rock wall way back to the left to replace the brown boring fence and the stale grey concrete side of the splashdown pond.

  • _jj%s's Photo


    Nice, good first screen.  Maybe a little lacking on path details and details around the splashdown, but as a whole well done. 

     

    I'd maybe try messing with your screenshot method so it doesn't scale oddly, would recommend not using snipping tool if you did, doesn't really play nice with RCT graphics.

     

    Thanks, yes some more details for sure needed! Cheers for the tip on cropping, thought it looked odd.

     


    Love that. Solid structures, commitment to the theme... keep going!

     

    Thanks! No expense spared...

     


    A nice glass structure, and I like the viewpoints and structures next to the splashdown. Only suggestion I'd have is basically what J K said, a few extra details in the splashdown area itself. Overall I really like this, solid stuff, and a very nice debut screen on NE.

     

    Cheers. yeah need to think on what to put in the splashdown. Usually not a whole lot there IRL.

     


    So happy you came here from Reddit. I always thought you had a ton of potential from what I saw over there. Super excited for this first release!

     

    Thanks! Happy to be here.

     

    The glass work and wood frames is so good

     

    Took a while, glad you appreciate it. Probably not the finished article yet, first time properly understanding how to clad buildings.

     

    Very cool screen! But it definitely needs more path details like bins and benches, and I also think you should use another lamppost object.

     

    Edit: also, isn't it spelled aviary?

     

    It is, can't believe I missed that! 

  • _jj%s's Photo


    That looks great - i love how the detailing of the glass structure isn't the victorian style we typically see but has more of an 80s postmodern vibe.

     

    Cheers, trying to I guess go with 90s, around the time IOA opened.

     


    Nice, quite clean. Ace's objects I'm not sold on.

     

    The chairs and signage?

     


    really nice has more zoo vibes than amusement park but really cool and clean shot

     

     

     

    i found the colour from the entrance of the pillars of the glas building nice as lamppost

     

    Thanks, yeah I need to find a better lamp post, something more jungle vibes. 

     


    beautiful work. I'd love to see you take a screenshot at the proper zoom resolution though!

     

    Looking forward to seeing more from you on this. Definitely missing some "life" in regards to peeps, seating, bins, maybe some signage/accent colors. Quick service on the pathways (umbrellas, etc)

     

    Yep for sure, will definitely add more. Cheers!

     

     

     


    That looks great - i love how the detailing of the glass structure isn't the victorian style we typically see but has more of an 80s postmodern vibe.

     

    Cheers, trying to I guess go with 90s, around the time IOA opened.

     


    Nice, quite clean. Ace's objects I'm not sold on.

     

    The chairs and signage?

     


    really nice has more zoo vibes than amusement park but really cool and clean shot

     

     

     

    i found the colour from the entrance of the pillars of the glas building nice as lamppost

     

    Thanks, yeah I need to find a better lamp post, something more jungle vibes. 

     


    beautiful work. I'd love to see you take a screenshot at the proper zoom resolution though!

     

    Looking forward to seeing more from you on this. Definitely missing some "life" in regards to peeps, seating, bins, maybe some signage/accent colors. Quick service on the pathways (umbrellas, etc)

     

    Yep for sure, will definitely add more. Cheers!

     

    Very cool structure. Overall, this feels a little lifeless to me, but it’s a great start and I’m very excited to see more from you!

     

    Agreed, and thanks!

     


    Love the windows in the rock wall, however I would use the same type of rocks throughout. Get rid of the 1k ruin rocks on the bottom and extend the same style of rocks framing the windows down to where the 1k rocks are. Just so it matches. Great screen, love the atmosphere.

     

    Edit - Maybe even extend that style of rock wall way back to the left to replace the brown boring fence and the stale grey concrete side of the splashdown pond.

     

    I agree, it doesn't look quite right. Yeh gotta keep the dining peeps dry! 

  • _jj%s's Photo

    Very cool structure. Overall, this feels a little lifeless to me, but it’s a great start and I’m very excited to see more from you!

     

    Agreed, and thanks!

     


    Love the windows in the rock wall, however I would use the same type of rocks throughout. Get rid of the 1k ruin rocks on the bottom and extend the same style of rocks framing the windows down to where the 1k rocks are. Just so it matches. Great screen, love the atmosphere.

     

    Edit - Maybe even extend that style of rock wall way back to the left to replace the brown boring fence and the stale grey concrete side of the splashdown pond.

     

    I agree, it doesn't look quite right. Yeh gotta keep the dining peeps dry! 

  • Turtle%s's Photo

    mate love this. great interaction between the glass and the thatch. foliage is great, colors are great, and love that covered seating area. feels very real!

  • Sulakke%s's Photo
    The screen is great. The composition is flawless and technically its good too. The atmosphere would be even better if you could integrate more color in your work. Maybe add some red or yellow (bright yellow lamp posts?) to compliment the colors of the boats.
  • Splitvision%s's Photo
    This is great! Welcome to NE. Hoping to see many more screens from you :)

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