Screenshot / Robie House

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  Liampie Offline

  This is good, but probably my least favourite of the buildings you recreated so far. The real thing has much more emphasis on the horizontal lines. Yours is a bit too tall for that, and the windows are also taller than they're wide, making them point up. I think you can do more here! I like it still, though.

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  cBass Offline

  
  

  This is good, but probably my least favourite of the buildings you recreated so far. The real thing has much more emphasis on the horizontal lines. Yours is a bit too tall for that, and the windows are also taller than they're wide, making them point up. I think you can do more here! I like it still, though.

   

  Good points here. I was a little limited by the footprint and the fact that it had to be on top of the train tracks. To your point though, I'm working on changing the windows to something that creates more horizontality.

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