Screenshot / Coaster entrance

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  posted 2 years ago

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  Hex Offline

  Kinda gives me DarKastle queue vibes. Quite nice! I think the foliage needs a bit of work; It's extremely dense with about 2 tree types. Even if you want a dense-ish look, I think spacing it out so it can breathe just a bit will help. Having a few more tree variants will also improve the overall aesthetic!

  posted 2 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Once again, got a lot of good things going for you. It's more the technical side that I think leaves a little bit to be desired. Mostly the scale (too short) and the foliage. Adjust those two things and it'll improve the screen tremendously.

  posted 2 years ago

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  Axford Offline

  Kinda gives me DarKastle queue vibes. Quite nice! I think the foliage needs a bit of work; It's extremely dense with about 2 tree types. Even if you want a dense-ish look, I think spacing it out so it can breathe just a bit will help. Having a few more tree variants will also improve the overall aesthetic!

  Once again, got a lot of good things going for you. It's more the technical side that I think leaves a little bit to be desired. Mostly the scale (too short) and the foliage. Adjust those two things and it'll improve the screen tremendously.

  Thanks for the advice. I am working on improving the foliage but the scale, having a large part of the project done, I prefer to keep it in mind for a future project.

  posted 2 years ago

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