If I have any criticism it would be that the trees are sort of randomly placed. I'm not a foliage expert, but when I look at it, I don't understand the reason why particular trees are placed in certain areas and not others. I think that you should ask yourself which trees would naturally arise in a specific area. Since you're aiming for a sort of otherwise minimalistic screen, that's the most important criticism I can offer.
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posix Offline
This is quite nice. Good exposure, good idea to produce highlights through composition of land and water, good colours. Welcome to the site.
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posix Offline
Okay, I overlooked.
And your desire to tell me off was bigger than to share a single thought on their screen?
Scoop Offline
so dramatic. sheesh.
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If I have any criticism it would be that the trees are sort of randomly placed. I'm not a foliage expert, but when I look at it, I don't understand the reason why particular trees are placed in certain areas and not others. I think that you should ask yourself which trees would naturally arise in a specific area. Since you're aiming for a sort of otherwise minimalistic screen, that's the most important criticism I can offer.
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I think Ge-Ride makes a good point, the foliage is a bit scattered. Pine forest? Deciduous forest? Or a swamp on a hill?