Screenshot / The Lonely Planet

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 2 years ago

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  AJ- Offline

  Thats so fun! There are pretty good facades, the ads and signs are great, 7-11 is my fav bodega cat? 

  posted 2 years ago

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  In:Cities Fan Offline

  I love this and I love that you're back. Great work man!

   

  I'd probably look into varying up the path type a bit. Scale almost seems slightly too big as well. A theme like this will be super hard to balance the chaos and clutter while still being readable, but I think you'll almost there. It's appropriately messy, but somehow still too clean. Some more street level details would work well for this I think. Barricades, rails, (even more) street vendors, broken pavement, (more) phone lines and poles, (more) advertisements, etc. Don't forget lighting! Some tall light poles for area light mixed with some more ground level lighting would really help to sell the theme.

   

  Hope some of that feedback is useful! If I ever have any free time, I'd be more than happy to contribute to this park in any way. It looks like a ton of fun

  posted 2 years ago

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  alex Offline

  I love that crusty yellow wall

  posted 2 years ago

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  pants Offline

  So cool! You're already building such a diverse portfolio of work in your comeback era. You make RCT feel like a means of expression in a really inspiring way.

  posted 2 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  In:Cities makes some good points. I'd also look in tidying up that strip of landscaping on the left, looks very unrefined. Have you considered using some custom rocks instead of RCT land?

  posted 2 years ago

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  J K Offline

  You've all made very good points and mostly all have been implemented. Agreed the screen needs a bit of refinement but also planned mess too! Thanks very much guys.

  posted 2 years ago

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