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06-April 14

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posted 11 years ago
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Stoksy Offline

The trampoline is by far the best thing in this screen; everything else is solid without being spectacular.

What's the object by the umbrellas? I think I've seen it in Rob's DCA, but I'm not sure...
posted 11 years ago
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Poke Offline

Some of your tree objects look hideous. Otherwise, it's okay.
posted 11 years ago
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Louis! Offline

The trampolines are fantastic, the best of those I've seen.

The diagonal benches are a nice touch, and the foliage is really nice too. Each tree seems to have been placed with a lot of thought, and I like that
posted 11 years ago
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Recurious Offline

I'm not really a fan of the brown pathing surrounded by the "traliewerk" fences near the umbrellas, I don't really see what the purpose of those areas is. I think some flowers or something like that would look better there. Other than that I think it looks nice
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][ntamin22 Offline

Agreed with Recurious. Aside from that, this is very nicely crafted. Not a shrub out of place.
posted 11 years ago
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robbie92 Offline

You managed to be inspired by the shittiest building in SFSF... haha
posted 11 years ago
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gijssie1234 Offline

This whole park will show parts from other parks that inspired me in playing this game. I will make my own version out of them so they will fit the park correctly.

After all I want to thank everyone who inspired me.

This in combination with my own architecture I hope it will present the right feeling I try to create.
posted 11 years ago
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robbie92 Offline

Oh, it wasn't a criticism in any way. Yur building looks quite nice, but I find it funny that anyone would notice the original in SFSF since it didn't fit in with the park at all. Yours seems to do a much better job at it
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gijssie1234 Offline

I wasn't take it as criticism, it was a small ode to my inspirators

I thougt it was really well done at SFSF.
posted 11 years ago
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