first of all finish your screens! with all the unfinishedness you've got out there it'd be nice to see something finished. but overall it's decent and i'd keep doing this, i don't know about the trees on the rooftops though
I can't quite believe what I'm seeing; I reverse freefall coaster! I didn't think people made them anymore.
Don't know much about LL so can't really judge how 'good' the screen is but personally what's there seems nice; the barrels as supports are not great but I think that maybe the rooftop trees would make more sense once the surroundings are finished, ie if it was an overgrown jungle that had expanded towards the 'village'.
I'm actually a fan of the roof structures and textures, it looks very meso-american. The potted yucca plants are a nice touch; maybe consider using them or other smaller foliage instead of trees in/around the buildings and saving the big trees for areas where they would have a little more room.
Good developments there. The buildings away from the main path look jumbled, even if they have the same amount of detail, because they don't have the large plain area of the path for visual contrast. Leaving some empty space like the (crop?) fields in can help things read better.
jungle foliage should be thicker, but that might just be a product of unfinished-ness. Also, why did you put plants on the roof? nobody can water those, nobody can see those.
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Lotte Offline
first of all finish your screens! with all the unfinishedness you've got out there it'd be nice to see something finished. but overall it's decent and i'd keep doing this, i don't know about the trees on the rooftops though
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Stoksy Offline
I can't quite believe what I'm seeing; I reverse freefall coaster! I didn't think people made them anymore.
Don't know much about LL so can't really judge how 'good' the screen is but personally what's there seems nice; the barrels as supports are not great but I think that maybe the rooftop trees would make more sense once the surroundings are finished, ie if it was an overgrown jungle that had expanded towards the 'village'.
Coasterbill Offline
This is really nice, but it would look much better finished. It's nice to see someone use the reverse freefall coaster.
Louis! Offline
it's not a bad attempt.
but LL is much more than throwing random textures together and adding random objects.
it needs a lot of cleaning up. try to keep your textures simple don't add random objects in an attempt to add detail.
][ntamin22 Offline
I'm actually a fan of the roof structures and textures, it looks very meso-american. The potted yucca plants are a nice touch; maybe consider using them or other smaller foliage instead of trees in/around the buildings and saving the big trees for areas where they would have a little more room.
csw Offline
I agree with Louis, it's a bit random. Try to choose a few less textures and see what happens.
Poke Offline
I like it.
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Version two.
Lotte Offline
thanks for putting the screenshot in the comments this time
][ntamin22 Offline
Good developments there. The buildings away from the main path look jumbled, even if they have the same amount of detail, because they don't have the large plain area of the path for visual contrast. Leaving some empty space like the (crop?) fields in can help things read better.
Louis! Offline
This feels better, I still think some of the foliage on the roofs are odd but generally it feels a lot cleaner.
This is much better than your RCT2 work btw.
Poke Offline
Definitely agree with Louis, continue doing LL.
inthemanual Offline
jungle foliage should be thicker, but that might just be a product of unfinished-ness. Also, why did you put plants on the roof? nobody can water those, nobody can see those.
Faas Offline
Yeah because forests are there because there are people that can water them.
inthemanual Offline
It's not a forest naturally growing on a roof though, it's a planter, which would need to be watered in most climates.
ida Offline
Isn't that because all the LL work is overly simple to make?
Faas Offline
No it's because you're not good at RCT2.