Screenshot / New Entrance Area

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  posted 2 years ago

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  SSSammy Online

  this looks cool man! a couple of points to improve on: i would give it a more significant landmark like a clocktower or something - something that will draw guests toward it

   

  the other thing is simply to give yourself a bit more room away from the map edge - it feels a little claustrophobic pushed up against the boundary, especially when theres usually a lot of important and interesting little things just outside the entrance that you could highlight

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  OddmentsAlchemyLab Offline

  Overall it looks very clean and neat with the materials mixed well (Maybe too mixed on the fences, but I like the choices). I would not have seen the small, impactful improvements that SSSammy pointed out, but he has an artist's eye. I can see how a stronger clocktower would really set this off.

   

  But I really commented to say that I LOVE the pinwheel awning! I love where you put it, I love the color. It's not the central piece, which makes it stand out more. It is off to the side yet pops so loud.  I will certainly misuse and abuse this idea in the next few parks I'll abandon.

   

  I also like the modern rest-area style buildings. They are super clean and sharply detailed. Simple but on point. And your foliage work is nice.

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  In:Cities Offline

  This is great - very nice work!

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  Jappy Offline

  I agree with Sammy. What you have a nice start, but a bit plain and uneventful. It needs something a little extra. 

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  Beautiful

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