Screenshot / Loopin' Lizards!

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  • In:Cities%s's Photo

    Gotta say man, this is my favorite thing I've ever seen from you - and probably my favorite screen in quite a while!

     

    Just so much fun.

     

    Two small things though.

     

    I'd consider changing the support colors from brown to either a yellow or a light cream color. Track color is perfect though!

     

    And the steve tree directly centered behind that one support in the middle of the screen sticks out in an awkward way haha.

     

    easily one of the best "new" builders out there right now. King

  • Gustav Goblin%s's Photo

    I know I was headassing it up in VC while watching you build this but dude, this is seriously impressive. You're one of the fastest growing parkmakers on the site; it feels like yesterday you were doing that first DKMP collab with Rob. Absolutely love your efforts and this is no exception.

  • Luketh%s's Photo

    Cool curvy queue and the big statue. Smoove exit from the station building, too.

     

    Could the raptor track spine be raised by one unit? Seems a large gap. Otherwise, I know you said you're going for early Schwarzkopf, but giga track spine also does a pretty good imitation of the later track styles.

     

    And I think the trains might generally be a bit shorter on early Schwarz coasters, too. Not that I'm one to lecture on realism.

     

    Agree with I:C about some shade of support recolor!

     

    ~B-]

  • alex%s's Photo

    This is great!

     

    The one thing which stands out to me as a bit awkward is the station - it's kinda squat (especially compared to the size of the maintenance shed), and the tower placement isn't ideal being directly under the track.

    My suggestion would be to beef the whole thing up a bit and move the tower so its on the tile next to the lifthill and drop like this:

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  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    I second Alex’s suggestion about the station. The tower looks funny under the MCBR
  • salsaontop%s's Photo

    I like this, can't put my finger on it but it's got a great vibe / aesthetic, not chaotic or overdone

  • RaunchyRussell%s's Photo

    This looks great so far dude! Alex definitely has a good point though.

  • Gustav Goblin%s's Photo


    This is great!

     

    The one thing which stands out to me as a bit awkward is the station - it's kinda squat (especially compared to the size of the maintenance shed), and the tower placement isn't ideal being directly under the track.

    My suggestion would be to beef the whole thing up a bit and move the tower so its on the tile next to the lifthill and drop like this:

     

    Obvious (and probably late) addition aside but redoing this would also give you the opportunity to put an additional support on the station building. Right now it looks like the track is ominously floating above the dome.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    Love a classic looper

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