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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Version1%s's Photo

    Typical Jappy and his fences.

  • FredD%s's Photo


    Typical Jappy and his fences.

     

    He didn't use double fences, it could be worse :p

     

    Lovely screen, much atmosphere. I really like the station of the mine train, the shape of the boat is a nice touch and I like that it is an open station.

     

    That said, I do find the station of the RMC underwhelming and small for such a coaster. I also still don't understand the location of it. Are you gonna do something more with the parts that go over the lake? 

  • Recurious%s's Photo

    Damn this is pretty cool, in particular love that RMC station. Interested to see more

  • Faas%s's Photo
    Good atmosphere. The fact that you use the same plank texture, in the same colour, for the path, the roof and the catwalk to the left of the screen makes it unreadable though.

    Stick to one type for catwalk, one type for roof, etc.
  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    Ditto what Faas said. Im glad you kept the mine train layout :)

  • alex%s's Photo

    looks great Jappy.

     

    Maybe add some footers or extra structure for the RMC supports where they are over water?

  • Ulvenwood%s's Photo

    I like how I immediately noticed the Liam rock and then after looking for a while it morphed into the environment. 

  • posix%s's Photo

    Very sweet. I like the overpowering greenery and the love you give to all rides and shops, regardless of how big they are. I also like the organic look you went for. I think it's quite successful. Also the theming features from trackitecture make sense and work well. Don't have much to comment as criticism other than to just keep playing to improve. If you want it, I think it'll happen automatically at this stage of your skills.

  • AvanineCommuter%s's Photo
    Really enjoy this, love the intentionally cobbled-together look of the area and the dense foliage.
  • Jene%s's Photo

    A really cool screen. I like the trackitecture shipwrecks and it has a great overall atmosphere. You could consider to place the ´shading cloths´ (I can't come up with the proper word) a bit more playful and give them different colors.   

     

    What are those two dark brown/dark green trees in the lower half of the screen? I can't recall seeing them anywhere else before.  

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