Screenshot / Jaguar

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 3 years ago

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  Jaguar Offline

  I am honored

  posted 3 years ago

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  Dark_Horse Offline

  https://ibb.co/nPgDWT3

   

  Better quality screen.

  posted 3 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Yeah not sure what keeps happening with your image quality but that second picture is much better. I don't really like the path type here, little too busy for me I think? But that drop tower is pretty sweet looking.

  posted 3 years ago

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  RWE Offline

  I remember this. You really improved it with all the feedback on discord. Keep going!

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  Dark_Horse Offline

  Yall are ruthless with the ratings on this. Is it really this bar?

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  alex Offline

  It's a decent enough start just keep going with it! I do think you could do more to sell the theme tho, I'm not really getting Mayan temple from this. Do you have a reference image of what you're trying to create?

  posted 3 years ago

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  Dark_Horse Offline

  It's a decent enough start just keep going with it! I do think you could do more to sell the theme tho, I'm not really getting Mayan temple from this. Do you have a reference image of what you're trying to create?
  

  It's not supposed to be heavily themed. Very loose interpretation of mayan.

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  AvanineCommuter Offline

  Screen resolution aside, this is a very nice improvement in your work. Nice job.

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  nin Offline

  Definitely an improvement over your previous work, but I think you should finish the area more before posting for more feedback (and should result in better ratings). Filling it out with more content and finesse will give us a better idea of what you're after, and will help you get a clearer picture as well. 
  
  This could be as simple as more foliage to fill the grass/negative space (unless the openness is intended), or as far as more archy, path details and/or theming. 

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