Screenshot / Key West and Turtle Trek
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13-February 22
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A Key West themed section and sea turtle enclosure of a design entry I've been working on for around four years. Maybe/hopefully get it done this year. Based off several buildings in Key West, SeaWorld Orlando, and a few other places in the Caribbean. Trying to achieve that tropical and colorful style while also incorporating some older re-purposed stone forts.
I've been trying to improve my architecture, and would really appreciate any input or feedback on where to improve. -
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Oh man this is really cool!
Great start.
My biggest feedback would be to get rid of the track rooves. they aren't really serving much purpose aside from being a bit distracting. I like the repetitive shapes of the dolphin rooves, but they would look much better if they were made with roof objects. For the Turtle Trek queue, I'd still keep a very wooden crossbeam support look (keep the aqua color for the wood), but swap the roof with something much less distracting than the coaster track.
Cool stuff nonetheless! Looking forward to seeing more.
Really cool to see your work again, it's been awhile!
Welcome back. This has been a long time in the making. It seems to have a mix of old and new techniques. The little bridge is cute and well executed. I agree with In:Cities regarding the wooden track, I think those roof shapes could be done with the objects you've already been using. Maybe add another section to the round building where the covered path is entering it.
I think your architecture is fine, but others more qualified might have some more tips. The white roofs aren't helping you though. It distracts from the rest of the detail work and makes the screen feel a little flatter than it actually is.