i think the palette is making this really contrasted, i wish it were a bit more balanced, colour wise, im struggling to see all the hard work you put in!
Go Bucks! Would agree that the palette is a bit red.. having been around the 'Shoe recently, literally ran around it, it seems a lot more dreary and grey during football season.
As much as I love this project, I am going to have to agree with the others on the palette. The roads feel a little too dark here, especially since there's already a bunch of cracks in them which shows their age.
Thanks for the feedback guys, sounds like the consensus is that the palette was a bit too strong. I toned it down a bit and agree that it's more pleasant now
Yes an improvement, though I feel the tarmac for the parking is still a bit dark, would it be possible to lighten it up just a touch?
Content-wise it's a great screen, very believable and realistic, always love a setting depicting a lively event! More peeps walking around the parking lot area and perhaps a few food stands or food trucks could increase the feeling of an energetic event even more.
I actually think the tarmac is fine now (in fact i didn't really see that as the main offender to begin with), it's just that one of your beige colours is extremely flat - see all the railings and deco pieces in the top left corner of the screen
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Comment System Offline
Tolsimir Offline
seems like all the people can't park
SSSammy Offline
i think the palette is making this really contrasted, i wish it were a bit more balanced, colour wise, im struggling to see all the hard work you put in!
alex Offline
Amazing screen but please get someone to fix the palette
G Force Offline
ottersalad Offline
Go Bucks! Would agree that the palette is a bit red.. having been around the 'Shoe recently, literally ran around it, it seems a lot more dreary and grey during football season.
Gustav Goblin Offline
As much as I love this project, I am going to have to agree with the others on the palette. The roads feel a little too dark here, especially since there's already a bunch of cracks in them which shows their age.
spacek531 Offline
I don't have issues with the palette. The dark "cracks" look like tar patches to me.
posix Offline
I tend to agree the palette is on the edge. Otherwise all we've seen of this looks pretty spectacular, and I'm much looking forward.
wheres_walto Offline
Thanks for the feedback guys, sounds like the consensus is that the palette was a bit too strong. I toned it down a bit and agree that it's more pleasant now
Gustav Goblin Offline
That is so much better
Splitvision Offline
Yes an improvement, though I feel the tarmac for the parking is still a bit dark, would it be possible to lighten it up just a touch?
Content-wise it's a great screen, very believable and realistic, always love a setting depicting a lively event! More peeps walking around the parking lot area and perhaps a few food stands or food trucks could increase the feeling of an energetic event even more.
alex Offline
I actually think the tarmac is fine now (in fact i didn't really see that as the main offender to begin with), it's just that one of your beige colours is extremely flat - see all the railings and deco pieces in the top left corner of the screen
Tolsimir Offline
such an improvement
MrTycoonCoaster Offline
amazing, nice work
tce_k Offline
Are they all Manchester United football fans?
Haha, great work, looks awesome.