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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Tolsimir%s's Photo

    seems like all the people can't park :p

  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    i think the palette is making this really contrasted, i wish it were a bit more balanced, colour wise, im struggling to see all the hard work you put in!

  • alex%s's Photo

    Amazing screen but please get someone to fix the palette

  • G Force%s's Photo
    Yeah the palette isn't helping you here. Otherwise fantastic.
  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    Go Bucks! Would agree that the palette is a bit red.. having been around the 'Shoe recently, literally ran around it, it seems a lot more dreary and grey during football season.

  • Gustav Goblin%s's Photo

    As much as I love this project, I am going to have to agree with the others on the palette. The roads feel a little too dark here, especially since there's already a bunch of cracks in them which shows their age.

  • spacek531%s's Photo

    I don't have issues with the palette. The dark "cracks" look like tar patches to me.

  • posix%s's Photo

    I tend to agree the palette is on the edge. Otherwise all we've seen of this looks pretty spectacular, and I'm much looking forward.

  • wheres_walto%s's Photo

    Thanks for the feedback guys, sounds like the consensus is that the palette was a bit too strong. I toned it down a bit and agree that it's more pleasant now

     

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  • Gustav Goblin%s's Photo

    That is so much better

  • Splitvision%s's Photo

    Yes an improvement, though I feel the tarmac for the parking is still a bit dark, would it be possible to lighten it up just a touch?

     

    Content-wise it's a great screen, very believable and realistic, always love a setting depicting a lively event! More peeps walking around the parking lot area and perhaps a few food stands or food trucks could increase the feeling of an energetic event even more.

  • alex%s's Photo

    I actually think the tarmac is fine now (in fact i didn't really see that as the main offender to begin with), it's just that one of your beige colours is extremely flat - see all the railings and deco pieces in the top left corner of the screen

  • Tolsimir%s's Photo

    such an improvement

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo

    amazing, nice work

  • tce_k%s's Photo

    Are they all Manchester United football fans?

     

    Haha, great work, looks awesome.

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