Screenshot / Smuggler's Bend @ Oasis [WIP]

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 3 years ago

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  Timothy Cross Offline

  Some odd stuff is going on with this screen, and I don’t think that it’s your best work so far. Concerning your style, however, it seems very grid-oriented. Others may complain that the grid is thus too evident in your work. But I say keep it that way as it accentuates your style and makes it stand out as a unique aesthetical design. If you lose that, you’ll lose much of what makes your work special. 

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  Ge-Ride Offline

  Interesting textures but it lacks unity. So many colors, different types of windows, and so on. And aside from the apparently unfinished left edge there's not much negative space. I think that you'll find a way to make it work, it just needs some finessing.

  posted 3 years ago

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