Screenshot / Tumble Town [Take1](Mostly done)

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  posted 3 years ago

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  G Force Online

  Solid start, I think some of the colors might be a bit gaudy but as a whole it works alright, maybe focus on having more flowy paths rather than sticking to the grid.

   

  Would also be cool if you could find a solution to the walls clipping thru the metal roofs at the bottom left.  Would really clean things up if that didn't happen.

  posted 3 years ago

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  Ge-Ride Offline

  Your architecture is improving. I can't tell whether you're getting better at coaster design or the bobsled happens to work in your chosen style. The foliage is nice. It seems that your forms are becoming a little less gridlike overall which is good of course.

  posted 3 years ago

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  Dark_Horse Offline

  Such an improvement from your previous work!

  posted 3 years ago

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  Dark_Horse Offline

  Such an improvement from your previous work!

  posted 3 years ago

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