You've got some good ideas, like the steel path blocks. But there are some bad ideas too - stuff that just doesn't work... The corner building has way too much 'stuff' on the second loor. Windows, walls, fences, more fences... Too much, looks ugly. Also I don't get the steeplechase track on top of the stall on the left. The log flume track is glitchy as fuck. And lastly, most subjectively, I've got a feeling that the white building will look much better without the tower.
You've got some good ideas, like the steel path blocks. But there are some bad ideas too - stuff that just doesn't work... The corner building has way too much 'stuff' on the second loor. Windows, walls, fences, more fences... Too much, looks ugly. Also I don't get the steeplechase track on top of the stall on the left. The log flume track is glitchy as fuck. And lastly, most subjectively, I've got a feeling that the white building will look much better without the tower.
the corner building is supposed to look a little messy and such. i purposely made it to look that way there. i'll agree with you on the tower though
As much as I love your work, I agree with Liam here. Textures is a problem I had but I've learnt that more textures doesn't necessarily make my ncso look better.
I like the idea of the steel base blocks as a path, but I'm not convinced of its execution here. I'm still seeing it as metal, if you know what I mean. It might work better in another colour combined with a different path... I don't know. I do really like the look of that foliage in the top right though. A nice rich bit of plant life there.
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BigB Offline
ah wait, thats ncso?
MCI Offline
^No it´s shit. You have to read more careful!
Otherwise I really like that sort of shit
Liampie Offline
You've got some good ideas, like the steel path blocks. But there are some bad ideas too - stuff that just doesn't work... The corner building has way too much 'stuff' on the second loor. Windows, walls, fences, more fences... Too much, looks ugly. Also I don't get the steeplechase track on top of the stall on the left. The log flume track is glitchy as fuck. And lastly, most subjectively, I've got a feeling that the white building will look much better without the tower.
Xeccah Offline
it's ncso lol
Xeccah Offline
the corner building is supposed to look a little messy and such. i purposely made it to look that way there. i'll agree with you on the tower though
Poke Offline
As much as I love your work, I agree with Liam here. Textures is a problem I had but I've learnt that more textures doesn't necessarily make my ncso look better.
Louis! Offline
I love it. Good job.
Chocotopian Offline
I like the idea of the steel base blocks as a path, but I'm not convinced of its execution here. I'm still seeing it as metal, if you know what I mean. It might work better in another colour combined with a different path... I don't know. I do really like the look of that foliage in the top right though. A nice rich bit of plant life there.
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