Screenshot / Emperor

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  RaunchyRussell Offline

  The cropping kills me, but the content you have provided is really top notch. Great archy here. Really want to see that coaster's full layout. Looks very interesting.

  posted 4 years ago

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  Recurious Offline

   

  Perhaps a bit of set dressing, like barrels, boxes, etc. Just another layer of "life" to make it feel lived in. Same goes for your level of detail and shapes, everything is so clean-cut that its coming off as sterile. Add some crunch!

   

   

   

  Hmm interesting, I was a little bit worried this would already come across as being to busy. But I can add stuff, I am good at adding stuff.

   

   

  The textures are very smooth, could use some crunch. But love the colors.

   

   

  You mean the wall textures? Or overall? I find it difficult to strike a good balance here because the textures of the real life buildings these were inspired by are also quite smooth. But maybe you meant something else. What kind of things would you suggest to add crunch? In my mind I thought this already was quite crunchy and dense. But maybe I am misunderstanding the definition of crunch.

   

   

   

  Really want to see that coaster's full layout. Looks very interesting.

   

   

   

  Honestly, I think once people see the full layout of that coaster they are gonna hate on it even more than they are hating on the crop here. It is quite unconventional. Think Cheetah Hunt meets Helix meets Blue Fire. A combination of Intamin and Mack, Intamack if you will.

  posted 4 years ago

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  roygbiv Offline

  I would add a deep end to the pool, the screen falls flat there? or the lack of motion or peeps. Might want to work on your photography skills cause these crops hhah

  posted 4 years ago

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