Washuzan meets Linga Sarira? Foliage may be a tad too crunchy, but it might be nit picking. A bigger point of criticism would be that the pink trees that I presume are cherry blossoms blend into the path, they're simply not pink enough. There are existing larger cherry blossom trees - pink chinese cedars also work well I think. This is expired cotton candy.
No complaints otherwise, really looking forward to seeing more of this. I'm a fan of the 'Asian ugly' movement.
This is really brilliant. The notice board especially is a superb piece that I've not seen done with that level of detail and clutter. Love the family of textures used here as well.
Kind of agree with Liam about the foliage, personally too many trees in the weird minty-green colour for my taste which kind of makes it look sickly.
I think those roofs need some more textures on top like some leaves or nets. Great work with the rest of this screen. That waterfront and the foliage look gorgeous.
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Way too many good screens on here. Love the poster spam and the foliage is on point.
Liampie Offline
Washuzan meets Linga Sarira? Foliage may be a tad too crunchy, but it might be nit picking. A bigger point of criticism would be that the pink trees that I presume are cherry blossoms blend into the path, they're simply not pink enough. There are existing larger cherry blossom trees - pink chinese cedars also work well I think. This is expired cotton candy.
No complaints otherwise, really looking forward to seeing more of this. I'm a fan of the 'Asian ugly' movement.
Xtreme97 Offline
This is really brilliant. The notice board especially is a superb piece that I've not seen done with that level of detail and clutter. Love the family of textures used here as well.
Kind of agree with Liam about the foliage, personally too many trees in the weird minty-green colour for my taste which kind of makes it look sickly.
posix Offline
Nice, good grit, perhaps a bit too micro-focused.
alex Fan Offline
fantastic, excited to see more
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trav ily
inthemanual Offline
It's well made, but the muted colors (pale foliage, tan tiles) don't exactly excite. Would like a bit more vibrancy or action to draw me in.
However, it's certainly well framed and composed, and very organic and believable.
dr dirt Offline
The blue overhangs are winners
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I think those roofs need some more textures on top like some leaves or nets. Great work with the rest of this screen. That waterfront and the foliage look gorgeous.
][ntamin22 Offline
a queue line just for me!
CedarPoint6 Offline
Oh dang. Really excited to see this. Love any kind of Japanese theming. Can't wait to see more.
IonZer0 Offline
Colors and details are super atmospheric, really want to see this in more context.
MrTycoonCoaster Offline
fantastic, excited to see more
In:Cities Offline
oh wtf how did I miss this. great work travis
AJ- Offline
super gorg, It looks so soft and light. The pink trees would be so lovely to sit under and watch the pond.
FredD Fan Offline
This is interesting, love the colors and textures here. Foliage great too!
G Force Offline
If this was just a teaser for H2H draft stock I'll be very upset with you Trav.