Screenshot / Kichijoji Park East Gate

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    I can. ;)
  • RaunchyRussell%s's Photo

    Way too many good screens on here. Love the poster spam and the foliage is on point.

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Washuzan meets Linga Sarira? Foliage may be a tad too crunchy, but it might be nit picking. A bigger point of criticism would be that the pink trees that I presume are cherry blossoms blend into the path, they're simply not pink enough. There are existing larger cherry blossom trees - pink chinese cedars also work well I think. This is expired cotton candy.

     

    No complaints otherwise, really looking forward to seeing more of this. I'm a fan of the 'Asian ugly' movement.

  • Xtreme97%s's Photo

    This is really brilliant. The notice board especially is a superb piece that I've not seen done with that level of detail and clutter. Love the family of textures used here as well.

     

    Kind of agree with Liam about the foliage, personally too many trees in the weird minty-green colour for my taste which kind of makes it look sickly.

  • posix%s's Photo

    Nice, good grit, perhaps a bit too micro-focused.

  • alex%s's Photo

    fantastic, excited to see more

  • G Force%s's Photo
    Very good, flat roofs might actually be a bit plain compared to everything else. Looking forward to seeing more of this.
  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    trav ily

  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    It's well made, but the muted colors (pale foliage, tan tiles) don't exactly excite. Would like a bit more vibrancy or action to draw me in.

    However, it's certainly well framed and composed, and very organic and believable.

  • dr dirt%s's Photo

    The blue overhangs are winners

  • hydroportal%s's Photo

    I think those roofs need some more textures on top like some leaves or nets. Great work with the rest of this screen. That waterfront and the foliage look gorgeous.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    a queue line just for me!

  • CedarPoint6%s's Photo

    Oh dang.  Really excited to see this.  Love any kind of Japanese theming.  Can't wait to see more.

  • IonZer0%s's Photo

    Colors and details are super atmospheric, really want to see this in more context.

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo

    fantastic, excited to see more

  • In:Cities%s's Photo

    oh wtf how did I miss this. great work travis

  • AJ-%s's Photo

    super gorg, It looks so soft and light. The pink trees would be so lovely to sit under and watch the pond. 

  • FredD%s's Photo

    This is interesting, love the colors and textures here. Foliage great too!

  • G Force%s's Photo

    If this was just a teaser for H2H draft stock I'll be very upset with you Trav.

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