Screenshot / Antioch

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  posted 11 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  The foliage in places (particularly round the splash boats) is quite random.

   

  Apart from that, it looks nice

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  Poke Offline

  I really want to build LL like this.

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  csw Offline

  Building on the top right needs some work, other than that it's really atmospheric. 

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  nin Offline

  Oh my that thumbnail is perfect. This is good.

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  ar2910 Offline

  I like the overall theme, and the buildings are well constructed and purposeful, as opposed to the random smattering that LL can sometimes devolve into.
  
  It's also great to finally see an LL park with a decent amount of breathing space that's not overtaken with random path offshoots or land tiles.
  
  However I'm not sure about the cobblestone paths running down the centre of the crazy paving. At the moment, the fact that it's one strip wide seems to make it look a little jagged and forced as an effect.
  
  I'd recommend keeping the cobblestones as a marker or to delineate specific side areas like food courts and seating areas.
  
  Otherwise fantastic though! 

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  posix Offline

  Very nice Liam.

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  This project looks like it could be an expansion of Allure Lake.

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