Screenshot / The Boneyard.. Land of nuclear fire
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10-December 20
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Okay wow that's busy. Good concept, relentless execution. Now I feel you need more refinement in your style to make it more sophisticated and pleasing to look at. For example the rocks are too overpowering, and you may have wanted to use them more carefully.
Fluxtrance is that you? Looks cool overall.
Definitely do something about the overuse of rocks and it could use something that looks more like rubble than rock. Are you going for a quarry? A mountain industrial area of some kind?
I could use a lot less rocks I'm just not sure what to replace most with yet. I wanted more of a nuclear devastated town. A destroyed wasteland.
I see. I would try to make some sort of warped rubble that looks like metal that's melted into a new form and also some partially destroyed buildings. That's the best thing I can think of.
There’s a lot of destroyed buildings, burning cars, destroyed overpasses I really just used the rocks as fillers and I do agree they do kinda overpower everything else I just didn’t know what else to put in at the time.
Very strong theming here. I agree that the rocks are maybe overpowering the screens, but the rubble and buildings sell the theme really nicely.