I really like the overall form and the impact with the landscape is great. I think some detailing to clean up the observatories themselves would help define them a bit more.
Quite nice and a curious idea. The little pathways are cute. Some of the colours are wonderful, and this triggers my "brown is a theme" sense. Not too keen on the Egyptian objects personally. Think they don't quite fit the vibe you're going for.
I think you may want to just add some content as it's a bit bare right now. That can be just naturalistic landscaping, or more articulate rock work without foliage. Just as of yet it looks somewhat naked.
I agree with cleaning up the bases of the observatories. You seem to be going for quite a coarse style (that I like for this screen), but the detailed fences on the right seem to refined. I would either replace them with some less detailed objects (my personal preference), or give all the other objects in this screen some more details. Either way, it would become a more consistent style.
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FK+Coastermind Offline
I really like the overall form and the impact with the landscape is great. I think some detailing to clean up the observatories themselves would help define them a bit more.
Ge-Ride Offline
Nice interaction between the land, trails and coaster. Wish I had some new critique but I don't know what else to say.
AJ- Offline
Love the colors!
posix Offline
Quite nice and a curious idea. The little pathways are cute. Some of the colours are wonderful, and this triggers my "brown is a theme" sense. Not too keen on the Egyptian objects personally. Think they don't quite fit the vibe you're going for.
I think you may want to just add some content as it's a bit bare right now. That can be just naturalistic landscaping, or more articulate rock work without foliage. Just as of yet it looks somewhat naked.
Hex Offline
I agree with the above - it feels a bit too bare. But it's not bad! Also I think the observatories need more oomph.
Jene Offline
I agree with cleaning up the bases of the observatories. You seem to be going for quite a coarse style (that I like for this screen), but the detailed fences on the right seem to refined. I would either replace them with some less detailed objects (my personal preference), or give all the other objects in this screen some more details. Either way, it would become a more consistent style.
Xtreme97 Offline
Excited to see! I love that someone went with a telescope/VLT theme (which is what I assume this is). The blue is very striking.