Overall, I think this is heading in a great direction. You've got a lot of nice detail and good articulation. Having just looked at your other screen which I felt had some very random architecture choices, this feels a lot more composed. I think looking at a real-life example may have helped?
I agree with Liam, the roof gets a little heavy, I think largely because all your details are in the same color which blends them into a solid mass. I think cleaning up some of that and considering how details line up due to different depths will help. Also, the two stairs near the front feel a little deco trim heavy. Great work though, I really like the second floor details and the towers.
Great work so far. Definitely has a DLP hotel feel from pictures I have seen. Just add some color to the roof details. It looks like it is all on one level right now.
Hi! While watching this building, I am forced to imagine that inside, on the ground floor, there are some solid columns supporting everything. Maybe it could be solid walls? But you can't see it. If the supporting elements were to be small columns on the edge, it would be definitely not enough.
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batwing Offline
This looks awesome!
Liampie Offline
I'd try to simplify the main roof, it's a bit messy and the black flat stuff only distracts. Great work overall though.
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ottersalad Offline
Wow
MrTycoonCoaster Offline
wow very nice
FK+Coastermind Offline
Overall, I think this is heading in a great direction. You've got a lot of nice detail and good articulation. Having just looked at your other screen which I felt had some very random architecture choices, this feels a lot more composed. I think looking at a real-life example may have helped?
I agree with Liam, the roof gets a little heavy, I think largely because all your details are in the same color which blends them into a solid mass. I think cleaning up some of that and considering how details line up due to different depths will help. Also, the two stairs near the front feel a little deco trim heavy. Great work though, I really like the second floor details and the towers.
Scoop Offline
This is actually pretty great, but I do agree about the roof comments.
alex Offline
This is great! The white wood panel walls and the detailing all look really convincing.
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RidePlay Offline
Hey thanks y'all! I will try to fix the roof, but it's kinda tricky using those big rounded blocks.
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Hi! While watching this building, I am forced to imagine that inside, on the ground floor, there are some solid columns supporting everything. Maybe it could be solid walls? But you can't see it. If the supporting elements were to be small columns on the edge, it would be definitely not enough.