Screenshot / Das rosa Pferd
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09-July 20
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Erlebnispark Ochsenbach
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Nice menu boards
Weird name, awesome architecture
Very pleasant stuff.
Lovely work on the peach building. The flower trellis bits could use some brighter greens to stand out a little.
That thumbnail is an absolute winner, wow. Really a notch above your other stuff going by that alone!
In my opinion, the side entrance of that peach building leading to the seating is missing something though. It's hard to tell what, but it seems flat. Removing a window or two, or giving it some fake chimney going along it maybe. But that's only because the front exceeds my expectations so much!
Also, was wondering what dark green tree/bush object that is behind that building. It works well!
Lovely. I really like the balcony.
I love that building, great archy. Not a fan of those support things on the helicopters scoop was talking about. I think they clutter up the screen, unless I'm missing the point. Also super minor but you have some bricks facing the opposite way in front of the tables, those could use a rotate.
Great building Fred. Feels very realistic and I love those menuboards. Maybe consider making those archways to the terrace the same color as the menuboards, because they blend in with the foliage.
I echo the feedback on those white supports. On first glance I had trouble seeing if they were ground floor or up.
I think the roof on that shoestringed kiddyride looks very heavy. You could consider making it a little flatter.
only thing i can complain about is that the shapes both path and architecture and foliage to an extent are all very blocky
otherwise great stuff
Im not a fan of the mini helicopters either. They're very hard to read. I also agree with what Jene said about the roof that looks quite heavy. I'd suggest adding more supports or 1/4 walls so that it doesnt look too heavy.
The building is great and I like the colors you used.
I realy like the terras and those glass doors of the restaurant. There's a nice vibe in this screen. As I mentioned befor on pretpark.club, I enjoy the atmosphere you have created in this park! Just so cosy.
Can't wait to see more!
I don't see the appeal with the building. It's colors are nice I guess but it's wildly out of proportion with uneven floors. First floor is like four units, second is like almost seven including the trim and then the roof is like another six.
Overall the atmosphere is pretty nice though. I don't mind the helicopters, either!
Call it "Das Rosa Ross"
Sometimes I like things being a little out of proportion.
Just like your mom
Screen looks great, very atmospheric. I'd echo comments about the white stilts on the helicopter ride. Maybe adjust the color of the ride to something less loud over the path? Have the helicopters themselves be the color?
I agree the building is a little out of proportion but it doesn't bother me. I love love love the menu boards. Maybe add a few more tables to the eating area? Feels very social-distanced to me right now...
yeah i think the first floor should be taller than the second, the thing in the top left is interesting but idk what it is
I love the atmosphere, but I also have to echo the thing about the white poles. It makes it look like the ride is on the ground while it isn't.
I don't really agree that much about the building, it seems like the wooden poles make the first floor look lower than it actually is.