the ramp texture is kinda fucked. path is kinda too inconsistent for me if you are going for contemporary. I love the stone in the top and bottom left, would like more of that less of anything else if natural. I dont think you need to block the tunnel view with trees either
Very nice, loving the style and color choices here. The brown of the coaster together with that warm off-white path makes me think of some tasty dessert, like an affogato... mmmm. The light blue/dark green for the trains seem spot on too, nice.
I really like that big white building - elegant, simple, believeable, unique - I think it has it all. The only thing I can think of would be to try adding some very thin flat roofing pieces to smooth out the transitions between the three different path types (seating area, inside of the white building, the off-white path) so that it doesn't emphasize the grid as much - provided there is a color that blends well, of course.
Even if they can't be seen in full, I kinda feel like the smaller white structures on the left might need something more, an addition of color or something, maybe more trim along the sides. Not sure what, and I might be wrong as they're partly obscured here.
Lastly, I really like the park map, but maybe it could be just a tad bit more ornate around the top? And perhaps you could add some map racks on the side? Would be interesting to see it refined just a little bit further.
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roygbiv Offline
the ramp texture is kinda fucked. path is kinda too inconsistent for me if you are going for contemporary. I love the stone in the top and bottom left, would like more of that less of anything else if natural. I dont think you need to block the tunnel view with trees either
FredD Offline
Great vibe, not a fan of the thick white fence there. Get rid of that and you're golden.
Splitvision Offline
Very nice, loving the style and color choices here. The brown of the coaster together with that warm off-white path makes me think of some tasty dessert, like an affogato... mmmm. The light blue/dark green for the trains seem spot on too, nice.
I really like that big white building - elegant, simple, believeable, unique - I think it has it all. The only thing I can think of would be to try adding some very thin flat roofing pieces to smooth out the transitions between the three different path types (seating area, inside of the white building, the off-white path) so that it doesn't emphasize the grid as much - provided there is a color that blends well, of course.
Even if they can't be seen in full, I kinda feel like the smaller white structures on the left might need something more, an addition of color or something, maybe more trim along the sides. Not sure what, and I might be wrong as they're partly obscured here.
Lastly, I really like the park map, but maybe it could be just a tad bit more ornate around the top? And perhaps you could add some map racks on the side? Would be interesting to see it refined just a little bit further.
All in all, great screen, I wanna see more!
batwing Offline
I like it. Curious where this all is going with Perenmoes!
secondrun919 Offline
Is it a sarcasm?
In:Cities Offline
Yes it is
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secondrun919 Offline
Wow
Wow, don't you like this screenshot?