Screenshot / Park entrance

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  posted 4 years ago

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  salsaontop Offline

  I like this, nothing over-pretentious or excessively ambitious, just some good old fashioned park making.

  Personally the biggest criticism I'd have is that all the buildings are quite similar in repeating the same wall pattern over again, maybe some awnings or other small details could break this up.

  I like the back of house entryway a lot! As well as the overall aesthetic, the park seems pretty relaxing!

  posted 4 years ago

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  Airtime Offline

  I like this, it has a nice old school vibe.
  
  I think you could expand the brown path out a tile to break up the large area a little.

  posted 4 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  I can tell this is rooted in Dutch parkmaking! I like the entrance building, but it needs an accent. A tower or some kind of ornament in the middle.

   

  The main street I'm not a fan of, every building is just fences stacked on top of fences. Most of the buildings don't even have doors! Lack of doors aside, less is more.

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  Jappy Offline

  This looks like my old stuff! Yeah, large amounts of pirate roofs are a clear indicator of old school Dutch parkmaking.

   

  I like the large plaza, that's def a plus in my eyes. Most of my critcism is the same as Liams, the buildings could use some work. Some are a bit flat and could use some awnings, balconies or signs. Or even doors.

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  In Flames Offline

  Thanks for the feedback. I hope to release this park someday with all of your considerations included.

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  Coaster-GEOFF Offline

  I really like parts of it... The pirates roofs are not part of that

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