Screenshot / Glacier Cove

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  • JJayMForce%s's Photo
    I admire all this screen.
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    very cool!  loving the underwater detail.

  • Kleptopatra%s's Photo

    It's nice, but I wish there was more. I'm only seeing a few waterslides and I wish I could see more. Parks need more than a couple attractions in order to keep guests satisfied. I would recommend adding a few more slides in order to occupy your guests.

     

    It would have been great if you had made some facilities or what we call "back-stage areas". That would help with the realism of the park. Right now I'm not believing this is a real park. I want to believe. 

     

    I also think this park would benefit from more placemaking. Is this actually near a ski resort? Is it in Hawaii? Where are we supposed to be? Essentially I'm asking where the park is located. Creations that are specific about that are better and I think you have room to improve. Once you decide where this water park is you can begin to develop a theme for it.

     

    People who go to parks (also sometimes called park-goers, though that is more of an industry term) will need to use the restroom or else they might pee in the pool and cause a give attraction to close down for a while. Here is some reading on that: https://www.allenpoo...ool-urine-tips/

    Essentially I think you need to add bathrooms for guest satisfaction. 

     

    So all in all I think this park is a good start but I would like to see some more thought put into your design work. Once we begin to see that I think you will begin to get more positive feedback. You won't be able to get better over night, this takes a lot of time. Just keep at it. That said, high pass. Sincerely, Kelpotatra!

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    - Wall of text -

     

     

    That's quite a lot of assumptions from one screenshot! I think you'll probably be pleasantly surprised from the rest of this park, based on what I can actually see in the screenshot.

     

     

     

    I think this looks wonderful, and I'm very excited to see the rest of this project.

  • In:Cities%s's Photo


    It's nice, but I wish there was more. I'm only seeing a few waterslides and I wish I could see more. Parks need more than a couple attractions in order to keep guests satisfied. I would recommend adding a few more slides in order to occupy your guests.

     

    It would have been great if you had made some facilities or what we call "back-stage areas". That would help with the realism of the park. Right now I'm not believing this is a real park. I want to believe. 

     

    I also think this park would benefit from more placemaking. Is this actually near a ski resort? Is it in Hawaii? Where are we supposed to be? Essentially I'm asking where the park is located. Creations that are specific about that are better and I think you have room to improve. Once you decide where this water park is you can begin to develop a theme for it.

     

    People who go to parks (also sometimes called park-goers, though that is more of an industry term) will need to use the restroom or else they might pee in the pool and cause a give attraction to close down for a while. Here is some reading on that: https://www.allenpoo...ool-urine-tips/

    Essentially I think you need to add bathrooms for guest satisfaction. 

     

    So all in all I think this park is a good start but I would like to see some more thought put into your design work. Once we begin to see that I think you will begin to get more positive feedback. You won't be able to get better over night, this takes a lot of time. Just keep at it. That said, high pass. Sincerely, Kelpotatra!

     

     

    lol SRF don't listen to a thing this nerd says ^

     

    Jsoh

  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    "sincerely, kelpotatra"

    almost
  • AvanineCommuter%s's Photo
    I... uh.... who is that?
  • robbie92%s's Photo

    If only we had signatures, so I could be a person that goes to parks (also known as a park-goer, but that's more of an industry term). 

  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    Nice use of curves, really bringing an organic feel to the whole area. I like that you've gone 4 peeps per ride on the slides too - adds a sort of 'family' aspect to it.

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