Screenshot / Nature Trail

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  Comment System Offline

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  Jaguar Offline

  The landscaping as a whole is nice, I like the contrast between the marsh and the hills.
  
  However, the grass at the top of the hill looks too sparse and way too symmetrical because of the repeating objects. Maybe make it look more varied like the foliage that's closer to the bottom

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  RWE Offline

  where is the new object on this screen?

  posted 5 years ago

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  ar2910 Offline

  I think the foliage and its layering is spot on for a marshy depression

   

  However I'm not sure about that harsh, black tarmac path. Maybe a more muted colour, or something a little more natural would fit the area better.

   

  Foliage and boardwalk is superb though, kudos

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  nin Offline

  Might be the move to break up the tiling of that grass object on the far left a bit. Just sprinkle in some other grasses to break the monotony.
  
  Otherwise looking good!

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  SSSammy Offline

  I agree with nin, you've got a great organic shape in the middle but it feels a little tile based on the left and top, sprinkling in some veins of blank tiles and veins of thicker grass would help it feel more organic

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