Another great screen. Everything creates a very beautiful atmosphere. From an aesthetic point of view, I would suggest lowering the awning above Arnold's store. When it comes to supporting the section of the rollercoaster track with two loops - from an engineering point of view: this black shed at the bottom would quickly fall. Concrete brackets should not form a roof structure, they act as foundations. As much as the forces in the roof supports should be transferred to the ground (foundation), for example through concrete walls.
The concrete footers on top of the "arcade" sign don't really make sense, probably something more creative you can do for that honestly. Not sure if I dig the pink train either, whats the deal with that?
Otherwise, nice screen, lots of atmosphere here. Definitely draws inspiration from DAW well, lol.
This looks so lively, even without peeps! Looking forward to see how it looks with peeps walking through it. The only feedback I can give is to maybe alter the flesh-color on the tower, which seems off to me. Maybe more bordeaux-red or even something completely different. And maybe put the letters of the ARCADE-sign just a little higher; so the peeps can see it.
Stunning. Looked at the screen hard for a long time to see if there is any improvements that I could suggest - managed to find only one thing that irks me a bit: not a fan of the brown planter combined with the bright yellow/red flowers in front of the flat ride in the upper left corner. I'd go for some other colors for the flowers - I imagine a light blue would be a nice fit, perhaps together with some purple. Another thing I noticed is that there seems to be no path objects, but the screen is already so nicely composed and atmospheric that it doesn't really feel like it needs them. Still, maybe you could elevate it even more by adding a few lamps, trash cans, and benches.
The rest I think is perfection. Vibrant and packed with content without being cluttered in any way, and it just looks really fun and inviting. My favorite thing is probably the pink train! Excellent example of a bold choice that definitely pays off here - hopefully in other places of the park too.
No negative comments at all apart from the fact it's perhaps a bit cramped. It could've used some more breathing room, but I like it nontheless. great work!
To you all, thanks so much for all the great feedback on here!! I'm soo glad you all are enjoying the park and it motivates me a lot to work on it. To cover some of the topics brought up : yes it is a daw inspiration, ive always loved the idea of a scenic coaster in the background and my goal was to implement the idea better. Also yes this is a different pallette, specifically the same one used in ruyatax' pacific ocean park. Arcade sign has been raised as well as some other detailed corrections have been implemented.
The Grand Arcade area for the rather central County Fair section. Featuring food stalls, games, the infamous hopper, an old fashioned music express ride, and the Roscoe's Point Sky Room!
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Ziscor Fan Offline
I can't stop imagining this area just full of peeps! The foliage and landscaping around the 'Arcade' sign really matches the scene.
battle boy Offline
Another great screen. Everything creates a very beautiful atmosphere. From an aesthetic point of view, I would suggest lowering the awning above Arnold's store. When it comes to supporting the section of the rollercoaster track with two loops - from an engineering point of view: this black shed at the bottom would quickly fall. Concrete brackets should not form a roof structure, they act as foundations. As much as the forces in the roof supports should be transferred to the ground (foundation), for example through concrete walls.
FredD Offline
Lovely screen. That custom wooden coaster on the arcade is awesome. This whole screens awesomeness. Can't wait to see more from you!
G Force Offline
The concrete footers on top of the "arcade" sign don't really make sense, probably something more creative you can do for that honestly. Not sure if I dig the pink train either, whats the deal with that?
Otherwise, nice screen, lots of atmosphere here. Definitely draws inspiration from DAW well, lol.
ottersalad Offline
I really like how well everything seems integrated into the hillside. Definitely some strong DAW vibes though
posix Offline
For me it looks much more like Ruyatax which is a great thing too of course. Lovely stuff, can't wait for this.
I'm liking this new, more vibrant and "happy" style of Ruyatax, barnNID, and you.
RWE Offline
wow
CoasterCreator9 Offline
Is this using a palette? Colors seem different to me.
Jene Offline
This looks so lively, even without peeps! Looking forward to see how it looks with peeps walking through it. The only feedback I can give is to maybe alter the flesh-color on the tower, which seems off to me. Maybe more bordeaux-red or even something completely different. And maybe put the letters of the ARCADE-sign just a little higher; so the peeps can see it.
AvanineCommuter Offline
DAW inspiration? Lovely overall.
Cocoa Offline
^yeah, I'd say watch that you're not copying DAW too closely- quite a few of these structures are very similar.
Splitvision Offline
Stunning. Looked at the screen hard for a long time to see if there is any improvements that I could suggest - managed to find only one thing that irks me a bit: not a fan of the brown planter combined with the bright yellow/red flowers in front of the flat ride in the upper left corner. I'd go for some other colors for the flowers - I imagine a light blue would be a nice fit, perhaps together with some purple. Another thing I noticed is that there seems to be no path objects, but the screen is already so nicely composed and atmospheric that it doesn't really feel like it needs them. Still, maybe you could elevate it even more by adding a few lamps, trash cans, and benches.
The rest I think is perfection. Vibrant and packed with content without being cluttered in any way, and it just looks really fun and inviting. My favorite thing is probably the pink train! Excellent example of a bold choice that definitely pays off here - hopefully in other places of the park too.
MrTycoonCoaster Offline
Really nice, good work
Jappy Offline
No negative comments at all apart from the fact it's perhaps a bit cramped. It could've used some more breathing room, but I like it nontheless. great work!
hydroportal Offline
RCThibo Offline
This is some phenomenal work, good job!
nin Offline