Screenshot / Pirates of Tripoli

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  Liampie Offline

  I like the yellow building and the queue with the trellis, but the bit with the big brown triangles and whatever the purple stuff is, is honestly pretty horrible looking. Your work needs space to breathe and it doesn't get any!

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  Yeah "I like the yellow building and the queue with the trellis"

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  theflowdiskord Offline

  
  

  Your work needs space to breathe and it doesn't get any!

   I totally get this point and the rest of shiver me timbers is a bit more spaced out. This park is very loosely based on taron in phantasialand, so its got many closed in sections and lots of buildings. 

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  posix Offline

  I love the vibrancy in your work.

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  Cocoa Offline

  I almost wish that square of queue with the brown triangle covers and purple bit (?) wasn't there, or at least was a lot less cluttered. the yellow building could pop excellently and you already have that wood lattice covering off to the side

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  mintliqueur Offline

  
  

  I like the yellow building and the queue with the trellis, but the bit with the big brown triangles and whatever the purple stuff is, is honestly pretty horrible looking. Your work needs space to breathe and it doesn't get any!

   

  Personally I find that part one of the more interesting areas of the screen... Although maybe it's a little "over built" so to speak... I'd agree about the need for space to breathe, though! 

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