Screenshot / The Caribbean

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  posted 5 years ago

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  bigshootergill Offline

  Welcome to NE! You've got some really nice work going on here, loads of atmosphere happening! Everywhere you look there is something to see. It's awesome how you've mixed a variety of buildings through these little patches of islands. Coaster interaction with the paths adds a lot of excitement. 

   

  I'll give you one suggestion, add more underbrush below your trees. There are a lot of tropical-esque plants, shrubs, flowers etc that you can use. Might be good to even remove a few trees and add more foliage variety.

   

  Great to have you, looking forward to see how develop as a builder.

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  Jaguar Offline

  This definitely shows a lot of promise and skill... definitely a lot of cool little details and it's dense without being too chaotic. I do agree with bsg that some underbrush would really improve this.

   

  Also it's funny that you commented first, this screen is reminiscent of early bsg. The foliage just needs more lushness.

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  ottersalad Offline

  Welcome! Great stuff here. Only minor complaint is the foliage.. listen to what bsg said!

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  Gotta say, I wasn't sure how I felt about this when I saw the thumbnail.

   

  I was pleasantly surprised when I opened it in full. I really like the fort and the landscape work, with the buildings along the islands being very charming. Nice!

   

  I'm not convinced by the coaster layout. Lovely interaction but the sharp transitions just aren't doing it for me. Maybe you're going for a more fantastical element, but I'd have to see it in motion to see if that paid off! The foliage could use some sprucing up as mentioned above, and the structures are a little box-y in nature (though they look very nicely detailed!)

   

  Really good work for a first impression, and I think it's clear you have some serious potential.

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  I rather like the houses

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  Mynock Offline

  Looks awesome!

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  posix Offline

  Very nice. I like the boxy look. Welcome to the site.

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  Cocoa Offline

  yeah this is cool shit, love to see a new style with some crisp atmosphere

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  "I'll give you one suggestion, add more underbrush below your trees. There are a lot of tropical-esque plants, shrubs, flowers etc that you can use. Might be good to even remove a few trees and add more foliage variety." yes
  
  
  I like this stone object it is very cool.
  I loved the scenery, the colors are great.

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  KaiBueno Offline

  Wow...someone else with single wide pathing!
  
  Love the feel so far.

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