Screenshot / Brass Plains: Patriot

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  In:Cities Offline

  Excellent work. I really like the foliage. I think you did a great job with the fort structure as well!

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  ottersalad Offline

  I agree, the fort is pretty cool. 

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  Lilith Offline

  thjs whole right side is very pretty
  
  

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  Chocotopian Offline

  Good choice with the white on the coaster. Really sharpens it up, in my opinion.

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  G Force Offline

  Good work, atmosphere is clear and fun.

   

  I'd watch your scale tho, the structures on the lift hill and the entrance to the station seem pretty low, I'd raise both by atleast 1 unit.

   

  Usually I'd try to stick to 6 units for most levels, seems to work the best with the in game scale and peep scale.  Consistency here is important for realistic and believable parks.

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  The right side in particular has very nice atmosphere.

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  Camcorder22 Offline

  I like the foliage and atmosphere throughout.  Also like the look of the covered bridge even if the scale is a bit too big.  This screen looks like someone who is still getting some of the NE-style technical basics down but has a ton of creative potential, so I'm excited to see you continue to build.

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  FredD Offline

  The whole right side is pretty atmospheric indeed. Foliage is good. I see a lot of good ideas and composition. I echo what G Force said about the scale, those bars over the lift hill are head choppers  

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  Mynock Offline

  
  

  Excellent work. I really like the foliage. I think you did a great job with the fort structure as well!

  Thanks

   

  
  

  I agree, the fort is pretty cool. 

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  thjs whole right side is very pretty

  Thanks

   

  
  

  Good choice with the white on the coaster. Really sharpens it up, in my opinion.

  Thank you. I wanted to accent it a bit. Glad it shows.

   

  
  

  Good work, atmosphere is clear and fun.

   

  I'd watch your scale tho, the structures on the lift hill and the entrance to the station seem pretty low, I'd raise both by atleast 1 unit.

   

  Usually I'd try to stick to 6 units for most levels, seems to work the best with the in game scale and peep scale.  Consistency here is important for realistic and believable parks.

  I prefer 5, but sometimes use 6. 6 always looks so tall to me.

   

  
  

  The right side in particular has very nice atmosphere.

  Thanks

   

  
  

  I like the foliage and atmosphere throughout.  Also like the look of the covered bridge even if the scale is a bit too big.  This screen looks like someone who is still getting some of the NE-style technical basics down but has a ton of creative potential, so I'm excited to see you continue to build.

  Thanks, I'm sure I'll continue to come up short lol

   

  
  

  The whole right side is pretty atmospheric indeed. Foliage is good. I see a lot of good ideas and composition. I echo what G Force said about the scale, those bars over the lift hill are head choppers

  Thanks. The left side was built about 18 months before the right side, so from all the "like the right side" comments it's clear I sucked a bit less at the game after 18 months lol

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  Scoop Offline

  yeah everything here is actually really good, except for the layout. just doesn't flow well in some spots. Keep up the good work!

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  Mynock Offline

  
  

  yeah everything here is actually really good, except for the layout. just doesn't flow well in some spots. Keep up the good work!

  Translated as: everything is good except for the bulk of the screenshot which is the ride.

   

  Thanks Scoop, I'd expect no different from you. 

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  I loved all

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  Mynock Offline

  I loved all

  Thank you

   

  Great to see you too. Hope as is as well as can be in your life 

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