Screenshot / Arabian Garden - Finished Product

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  posted 11 years ago

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  Lotte Offline

  final product looks pretty good, just not sure if the that big hill before the brakes makes a lot of sense, because it's one of the biggest hills of them all. but i have to agree with what faas said and that is to just post less here and wait for a more finished product, the other two screenshots were kinda unneeded. also, you should check out /r/rct on reddit, it seems like you really could learn a lot from entering in some of the contests there.

  posted 11 years ago

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  inthemanual Offline

  From the other angle I thought the layout went the opposite direction. 

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  inthemanual Offline

  accidental double post. pls remove this./ignore

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  Lotte Offline

  
  

  From the other angle I thought the layout went the opposite direction. 

   

  i think that last hill is just too high so he had to make a lifthill. not really that good of an option, could use a lot more work and maybe he could reverse the layout so that that would be the actual lifthill 

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  gibbsies Offline

  I agree with gdb, the hill before the brake section doesn't make sense, try lowering it so u don't need the chain and the train won't speed up before being stopped by the brakes. Looks very nice though!

  posted 11 years ago

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  Kevarchitect Offline

  The foliage looks messy. I think you should go for an Arab gardens kind of look to keep the theme very neat and more Arab feeling. The major problem being that I would not be able to tell that this is Arabian if it had no title.

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  ida Offline

  The lift hill may not make sense, but it's there for reasons. The train is indeed just a bit too slow to make it up the slope, but if i were to remove it and add more lifthill boosts in the beginning, it would get way too high ratings i bet. And i DID promise to only show finished screens! For me, the coaster is finished, so i thought it was okay to show.
  
  And also @kev, it's not really the foliage that should make it look arabian but rather all the architecture mixed with the foliage.

  posted 11 years ago

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  Faas Offline

  It doesn't look Arabian indeed. And I would maybe find a way to make the large hill at the end go under the track instead of over. This looks weird. 

  posted 11 years ago

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