This reminds me a lot of Corkscrewed. That is a good thing in that it's a pleasant, well laid out entrance. I'm less enthusiastic about the colours, green and black is a curious combination for any building and especially an entrance that should feel a little more welcoming.
Check out point 3 and 4 in my passive agressive mega tutorial for some more thoughts that apply to your screen.
I like the colors for pairing, but it does set a darker tone for the park. If that is what you want, no worries. If it really is just a whimsical light day in the sun and gardens like the park name implies, you might want to swap black for white or yellow for example...or lavender.
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RCTER2 Offline
I think this is very old school, like people did 15 years ago. Maybe because of the custom objects that was used here. But it's nice.
Liampie Offline
This reminds me a lot of Corkscrewed. That is a good thing in that it's a pleasant, well laid out entrance. I'm less enthusiastic about the colours, green and black is a curious combination for any building and especially an entrance that should feel a little more welcoming.
Check out point 3 and 4 in my passive agressive mega tutorial for some more thoughts that apply to your screen.
Nice debut screen, man. Welcome!
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I like the colors for pairing, but it does set a darker tone for the park. If that is what you want, no worries. If it really is just a whimsical light day in the sun and gardens like the park name implies, you might want to swap black for white or yellow for example...or lavender.
Structure looks welcoming, and welcome to NE!
MrTycoonCoaster Offline