The ships nice, the coaster color is nice and I like the landscaping.
Supports are ugly and just obstruct the view of everything else. Its something I see more and more regarding to ncso (on deurklink) and I dont really get why. For the sake of creativity? For me it doesnt add anything except uglyness
The supports are by far the most distracting aspect of this screen, as there are a few too many of them, and their placement is a bit on the random side.
If you're going to use mechanical pipes and diagonal poles together, it will ease the transition between thicknesses if you stack 2-3 diagonals one unit apart on top of each other. It will give the supports a more defined shape. You may also consider spacing them out a bit more (and evenly) so the coaster looks more refined from a distance.
I like the color and density of the supports, and consider that I don't put a lot of effort into them myself. The black color works for me in this screen, but maybe a flatter cap would help the other perceived issie
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hpg Offline
Shipwreck looks great.
Supports are a bit... phallic?
phann Offline
Supports are ugly and just obstruct the view of everything else. Its something I see more and more regarding to ncso (on deurklink) and I dont really get why. For the sake of creativity? For me it doesnt add anything except uglyness
Terry Inferno Offline
The supports are by far the most distracting aspect of this screen, as there are a few too many of them, and their placement is a bit on the random side.
If you're going to use mechanical pipes and diagonal poles together, it will ease the transition between thicknesses if you stack 2-3 diagonals one unit apart on top of each other. It will give the supports a more defined shape. You may also consider spacing them out a bit more (and evenly) so the coaster looks more refined from a distance.
Jene Offline
Finally a park based on the great movie ´Shipwrecked on Big Black Dildo-Island'.
Just kidding. But please consider changing the supports. The shipwreck looks great.
Skiffa Offline
As I said I like the sails, how they go straight down adds allot.
People make a good point about the supports.
pierrot Fan Offline
I really like the supports tbh. It's a bit off in realistic point but somehow very aesthetic. what actually bothers me is the trains color.
Lilith Offline
the supports would be good if there were fewer of them
the ship looks fantastic
Hex Offline
The phallic references have completely killed my childhood...
In all seriousness, I'm glad you all seem to like the shipwreck!
I changed some colors around and lessened the amount of supports.
Thank you for all of the feedback!
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