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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • hpg%s's Photo

    Shipwreck looks great.

     

    Supports are a bit... phallic?

  • phann%s's Photo
    The ships nice, the coaster color is nice and I like the landscaping.

    Supports are ugly and just obstruct the view of everything else. Its something I see more and more regarding to ncso (on deurklink) and I dont really get why. For the sake of creativity? For me it doesnt add anything except uglyness
  • Terry Inferno%s's Photo

    The supports are by far the most distracting aspect of this screen, as there are a few too many of them, and their placement is a bit on the random side.

     

    If you're going to use mechanical pipes and diagonal poles together, it will ease the transition between thicknesses if you stack 2-3 diagonals one unit apart on top of each other. It will give the supports a more defined shape. You may also consider spacing them out a bit more (and evenly) so the coaster looks more refined from a distance.

  • Jene%s's Photo

    Finally a park based on the great movie ´Shipwrecked on Big Black Dildo-Island'.  :p 

     

    Just kidding. But please consider changing the supports. The shipwreck looks great. 

  • Skiffa%s's Photo

    As I said I like the sails, how they go straight down adds allot.

    People make a good point about the supports.

  • pierrot%s's Photo

    I really like the supports tbh. It's a bit off in realistic point but somehow very aesthetic. what actually bothers me is the trains color.

  • Lilith%s's Photo

    the supports would be good if there were fewer of them

    the ship looks fantastic

  • Hex%s's Photo

    The phallic references have completely killed my childhood...

     

    In all seriousness, I'm glad you all seem to like the shipwreck! 

     

    I changed some colors around and lessened the amount of supports.

     

    Thank you for all of the feedback!

  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    I sorta like the supports... It gives it an intense and dark atmosphere that feels a bit stifling. Which is cool
  • KaiBueno%s's Photo
    I like the color and density of the supports, and consider that I don't put a lot of effort into them myself. The black color works for me in this screen, but maybe a flatter cap would help the other perceived issie

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