Screenshot / Talon: Grip of Fear

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  G Force Offline

  I think you have the right idea here, same with the other screen. Just needs more details and development to make it stand out, that'll come with time and experience.

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  phann Offline

  Needs more finish. But keep it clean

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  Jappy Offline

  Very empty, for sure. Add some foliage, flowers, lamps, bins, benches, stalls.... Pro tip: put some dirt under your paths, it makes them look much more realistic.

  posted 5 years ago

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