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  posted 5 years ago

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  Mattk48 Fan Offline

  Looks awesome, great colours. Really cheery atmosphere. I like the blue under the power tower. Peeps are going to make this even better

   

  When the inevitable Faas anti steel roof comment arrives, don't listen they look great here

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  csw Offline

  Bold move mixing the mint toothpaste color with aqua toothpaste color. Idk about the colors, everything seems washed out. Even the black roof doesn't seem very dark. This is probably what california really looks like but I need sunglasses to look at this screen.

   

  Besides the colors it looks great. Even the colors aren't that bad, just need maybe one or two more darker hues to balance everything out. 

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  Timothy Cross Offline

  The California vibe is very evident so well done there. But you need a more thought-out art direction, as the screen lacks some cohesion. The buildings appear unrelated and the black roof building bottom right looks very foreign. Also, you need to create a hierarchy which moves the eye from the most important elements to the lesser, and color accordingly. In this particular screen, there’s probably too many differing colors (stylistically) in a poor scheme, and I believe that the coaster should have a darker/bolder shade. Also agree with csw about balancing things out.

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  Recurious Offline

  Overall pretty good, I feel like you are missing path details though like lanterns, benches and litter bins. The paths look so empty atm!

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  SlayMeGaga Offline

  I feel the scale is a bit off, the coasters lift should be a tad bit taller. The color and textures could use some tweaking as well. Overall I like where this is going.

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  In:Cities Offline

  I'd probably mix in some more of that darker shade of path color along some of the edges/buildings to give it a little more contrast without losing the overall look you're going for. Love this project!

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  FredD Offline

  I'd probably mix in some more of that darker shade of path color along some of the edges/buildings to give it a little more contrast without losing the overall look you're going for. Love this project!

  
  
  This, my friend, is a great suggestion! It really looks much more interesting right now with that darker shaded path mixed in. Thanks

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  G Force Offline

  Cool atmosphere and colors. There's one thing I'd suggest that would help make it feel more complete and atmospheric but I think you can guess what that is.

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  phann Offline

  Really like the brightness. Makes it feel alive (even more with peeps). Scale is fine to me. Id rather see this then humongous coasters wich dont fit the game nor fit real life.

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  Faas Offline

  I think it's a bit too much white and blue. i also think the facades to the left are a bit too flat, they don't really look like the buildings are being used. 

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  Jappy Offline

  You know i like this. But Recurious has a point. it's missing path features.

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  FredD Offline

  
  

  You know i like this. But Recurious has a point. it's missing path features.

   

  Those are already added in the mean time   

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  Coasterbill Offline

  I hate the path but I love everything else

  posted 5 years ago

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