Hotel entrance to park

05-July 19
Point West theme park
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screen_5739 Hotel/Hotel entrance to park

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Alfy Offline

Wow! Amazing I love this!
posted 5 years ago
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Scoop Offline

Really nice stuff. Already a major improvement from your last effort.
posted 5 years ago
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MK98 Offline

Great hotel! I love the flowers and overall use of colors.
The base of the building on the road needs a different color though. Black merges too much with the asphalt.
Whats happening on the right bottom of the screen?
posted 5 years ago
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Cocoa Offline

I like it- reminds me a bit of silvarett's rct2 work and ruyatax's stuff. maybe make the umbrella colors different than the glass windows? would help a bit with atmosphere
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RCThibo Offline

This looks amazing compared to your first screen!
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G Force Offline

The hotel is great, but the entrance and theme park buildings could probably use some more color. Grey roofs and tarmac is also sorta a tough combination here, maybe a little more contrast?
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MrTycoonCoaster Fan Offline

wow wow, was mega nice
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Faas Offline

Great hotel, but it looks too luxurious to have steel roofs.
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Scoop Offline

another thing... has a lot of royr vibes too it.
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Mattk48 Fan Offline

I'm not overly sold on that ticket booth. I don't think its up to the caliber of the rest of the screen. I think its too big/tall maybe. thats pretty minor though.

You know what, I have to agree with Faas on this one. I think steel roofs look good here, but if your worried about lore then yea that hotel would have a much nicer roof then basic steel down low where you can see it. Up top makes sense no one would see that except faas, Just that lower restaurant or whatever that is.

I think it would be nice to have a drive up area with an overhang for valet and stuff. I don't know what you have on the opposite side but maybe you could extend the parking lot and include it there?

Regardless of that this is an awesome hotel. I'm a big fan, you did a great job of including lots of details that bring it to life.
posted 5 years ago
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barnNID Offline

Thanks for the feedback everyone:)

-the base of the parking ticket booth building has been changed

-I changed the umbrella colors to purple. It made a bigger difference than I thought, thanks cocoa

-I changed some of the grey roofs to different colors, I didn't realize how weird it looked with the tarmac until it was pointed out

-Thanks for pointing out the steel roof thing, Its the kinda thing you don't notice until someone tells you haha
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