Screenshot / Ökensstad
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31-January 14
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The first look at the newest park I am working on called Högaberg. Because I am living very close to Sweden's Liseberg, I was inspired to make a Park completely in Swedish.
With that being said, this is a section of the Western area of the park (called Ökensstad for now). I cannot tell a lie, I took the idea of the buildings from one of BigB's old YouTube videos. They were just such a great idea, and they functioned well in the mostly NCSO workbench I am using.
This is the GCI inspired woodie called Pistol. It is the centerpiece of the Western area and winds its way through the canyons and mountains of the Wild American Frontier. It is not completely finished (as seen to the left of the screen) but...enjoy. -
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Looks a lot better than before. I have a few recommendations; create a source for the waterfall on the right, do something about the supports landing on that brown roof in the centre, and try using some different textures for your buildings.
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I'm glad I could help you in any way , even though I don't know the Video
The houses are all the same, just colored differently, try to add some other textures/Details/structures as said in the post before.
Also you should take another path, the one you use right now is to grey imo. Another would have more contrast to the surroundings.
The glass-Station doesn't fit the theme, the way you executed it.
Your Details (Barrels, bushes) look a bit randomly placed, remove them and place them new where hey are needed, not every roof Needs 4 Barrels and some bushes.
Try to improve your foliage, take one or two trees and place small trees and bushes around them, like an "island".
Have a look at Jonny93's Inselfieber for foliage..
Try to fix those points and I'm sure this will be something beautiful