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30-September 13
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The rockwork isn't the most convincing, it could use some work. Maybe mix it in with the foliage? I realzie the screen is a bit unfinished so it may be due to that as well.
I do like the bridge though, reminds me of Tomorrowland or something.
You seem to have a lack of vision here, as anything besides the path itself feels uninspired.
The foliage is unbalanced severely. You don't need undergrowth under every single grass tile, but you do have a nice combo of brush going for you. The white flowers, though, are kind of weird to me, and so is the rather lackluster landscaping.
Keep in mind, that everyone working on these parks has just a little over a week to complete an "island" section that is about 40x40. It's not an easy feat, no matter your build quality level.
I'm spamming the foliage because it's supposed to feel overgrown, especially on the one side of the fence. The white flowers were supposed to be a symbolic thing on the "safe" side of the fence, and I'm keeping them, but re-placing them to make them look much more natural.
The rocks in the middle of the screen were pretty lazy, I felt like I needed something to break up the empty ground there, and didn't want to put much more foliage in there, so I threw in some rocks pretty quickly.
I didn't think the path was actually anything special, but I'm glad it captured the look I was going for and that you both like it.
The bridge is good, the foliage is awful. Even if it's overgrown, you still need to take care.
Take a look at Ashcombe for some overgrown foliage (the hedges specifically)