The deco-block chimney looks a little bland. I feel like the same texture is repeated too much. A wider base might help that.
I really like the dark brick steps though. A version using normal, colorable brick is coming too, I assume?
About the screen instead of the objects now: I really like the composition, and I can really imagine myself there, even though it's entirely made-up. It looks a bit too attached to the grid, however, with a lot of your buildings being full-tile; 2x2 or 2x3. I'm also realizing that this might be the entrance, but it doesn't feel like an entrance at all, because it seems a little stifled, or dense. That could be different on the other side of the entrance however.
I think you're totally killin' it, Arjan. All the brown don't trouble me much, but the maybe break up the pattern in the middle some more. Maybe leave a 3x3 patch of grass around the pink tree.
But whatevs. I am loving your screens lately and I am awaiting an awesome park!!
@csw : I didn't want this design to be too colorful. I wanted it to become natural and warm in atmosphere. So most colors will be in the foliage. Thanks!
@inthemanual : The chimney is bothering me for the same reason you're telling me. Let's improve it.
'' I really like the dark brick steps though. A version using normal, colorable brick is coming too, I assume? '' : Of course. Both steps (steep and normal) in graveyard brick and normal brick.
The steep graveyard brick already existed, but variations are underway.
Thanks, i love my imagination.
You're looking at the entrance with the firepits.
On the other side you enter a square that's slightly bigger than the one in this screen. Also this being a design, the entrance didn't needed to be grandeur or something, since you're just entering another area of a park, but noticeable enough to convince you from entering a different area.
@ Nin : Thanks! I'll stick to my style, don't worry.
@ Angroc : Thanks for the tips, maybe i'll make some changes, but on the other hand, i do like how it is. We'll see.
A cool design is coming soon!
@ Coasterbill : Thanks!
@ Goliath123 : Okay.
@ Louis : Thanks!
Do explain your concerns, since i'm not sure what you're trying to say.
Some detail on or just on the edges of the supports would be killer. The fences around the magnolia look too japanese-ish compared to the rest, they don't exactly fit (just like the ones at the cafe). Maybe a different colour or fence?
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csw Offline
Really nice. There's a lot of brown, but not too much brown. New trees look great, especially the really big one.
inthemanual Offline
The deco-block chimney looks a little bland. I feel like the same texture is repeated too much. A wider base might help that.
I really like the dark brick steps though. A version using normal, colorable brick is coming too, I assume?
About the screen instead of the objects now: I really like the composition, and I can really imagine myself there, even though it's entirely made-up. It looks a bit too attached to the grid, however, with a lot of your buildings being full-tile; 2x2 or 2x3. I'm also realizing that this might be the entrance, but it doesn't feel like an entrance at all, because it seems a little stifled, or dense. That could be different on the other side of the entrance however.
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Angroc Offline
I think you're totally killin' it, Arjan. All the brown don't trouble me much, but the maybe break up the pattern in the middle some more. Maybe leave a 3x3 patch of grass around the pink tree.
But whatevs. I am loving your screens lately and I am awaiting an awesome park!!
Coasterbill Offline
This is exceptional.
Goliath123 Offline
i only suggest using the same path throughout for the area
Louis! Offline
Better than the previous screen by far, mainly due to the structure and shaping of buildings. Also the textures used are lovely.
I'm concerned over your foliage a bit, i'm not sure some of the plants you are using are right for this type of theme.
Arjan v l Offline
@csw : I didn't want this design to be too colorful. I wanted it to become natural and warm in atmosphere. So most colors will be in the foliage. Thanks!
@inthemanual : The chimney is bothering me for the same reason you're telling me. Let's improve it.
'' I really like the dark brick steps though. A version using normal, colorable brick is coming too, I assume? '' : Of course. Both steps (steep and normal) in graveyard brick and normal brick.
The steep graveyard brick already existed, but variations are underway.
Thanks, i love my imagination.
You're looking at the entrance with the firepits.
On the other side you enter a square that's slightly bigger than the one in this screen. Also this being a design, the entrance didn't needed to be grandeur or something, since you're just entering another area of a park, but noticeable enough to convince you from entering a different area.
@ Nin : Thanks! I'll stick to my style, don't worry.
@ Angroc : Thanks for the tips, maybe i'll make some changes, but on the other hand, i do like how it is. We'll see.
A cool design is coming soon!
@ Coasterbill : Thanks!
@ Goliath123 : Okay.
@ Louis : Thanks!
Do explain your concerns, since i'm not sure what you're trying to say.
olddtfan51 Offline
Is this going to be released I hope.
Poke Offline
This is really beautiful. Well done.
Arjan v l Offline
It'll be released within a week or so olddtfan.
Thanks PokeCoasterEmpires.
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Arjan v l Offline
Thanks geewhzz.
ida Offline
Some detail on or just on the edges of the supports would be killer. The fences around the magnolia look too japanese-ish compared to the rest, they don't exactly fit (just like the ones at the cafe). Maybe a different colour or fence?
thirteen Offline
this is great. i just love the tower.