Screenshot / The battle for the throne

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • csw%s's Photo

    Really nice. There's a lot of brown, but not too much brown. New trees look great, especially the really big one. 

  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    The deco-block chimney looks a little bland. I feel like the same texture is repeated too much. A wider base might help that.

    I really like the dark brick steps though. A version using normal, colorable brick is coming too, I assume?

    About the screen instead of the objects now: I really like the composition, and I can really imagine myself there, even though it's entirely made-up. It looks a bit too attached to the grid, however, with a lot of your buildings being full-tile; 2x2 or 2x3. I'm also realizing that this might be the entrance, but it doesn't feel like an entrance at all, because it seems a little stifled, or dense. That could be different on the other side of the entrance however.

  • nin%s's Photo
    Wow, I love this! I think over time refinement will come with your style, so keep building stuff like this because its great.
  • Angroc%s's Photo

    I think you're totally killin' it, Arjan. All the brown don't trouble me much, but the maybe break up the pattern in the middle some more. Maybe leave a 3x3 patch of grass around the pink tree.

     

    But whatevs. I am loving your screens lately and I am awaiting an awesome park!!

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    This is exceptional.

  • Goliath123%s's Photo

    i only suggest using the same path throughout for the area

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    Better than the previous screen by far, mainly due to the structure and shaping of buildings. Also the textures used are lovely.

     

    I'm concerned over your foliage a bit, i'm not sure some of the plants you are using are right for this type of theme.

  • Arjan v l%s's Photo

    @csw : I didn't want this design to be too colorful. I wanted it to become natural and warm in atmosphere. So most colors will be in the foliage. Thanks!

     

    @inthemanual : The chimney is bothering me for the same reason you're telling me. Let's improve it.

     

    '' I really like the dark brick steps though. A version using normal, colorable brick is coming too, I assume? '' : Of course. Both steps (steep and normal) in graveyard brick and normal brick.

    The steep graveyard brick already existed, but variations are underway.

     

    Thanks, i love my imagination.

    You're looking at the entrance with the firepits.

    On the other side you enter a square that's slightly bigger than the one in this screen. Also this being a design, the entrance didn't needed to be grandeur or something, since you're just entering another area of a park, but noticeable enough to convince you from entering a different area.

     

    @ Nin : Thanks! I'll stick to my style, don't worry.

     

    @ Angroc : Thanks for the tips, maybe i'll make some changes, but on the other hand, i do like how it is. We'll see.

    A cool design is coming soon!

     

    @ Coasterbill : Thanks!

     

    @ Goliath123 : Okay.

     

    @ Louis : Thanks!

     

    Do explain your concerns, since i'm not sure what you're trying to say.

  • olddtfan51%s's Photo

    Is this going to be released I hope.

  • Poke%s's Photo

    This is really beautiful. Well done.

  • Arjan v l%s's Photo

    It'll be released within a week or so olddtfan.

     

    Thanks PokeCoasterEmpires.

  • geewhzz%s's Photo
    nice
  • Arjan v l%s's Photo

    Thanks geewhzz.

  • ida%s's Photo

    Some detail on or just on the edges of the supports would be killer. The fences around the magnolia look too japanese-ish compared to the rest, they don't exactly fit (just like the ones at the cafe). Maybe a different colour or fence?

  • thirteen%s's Photo

    this is great. i just love the tower.

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